Bring Back the Hobbits by DymondOfLongCleeve
Merry and Pippin watched in horror as Boromir attacked the Orcs. Two arrows stuck out from his trembling body, and yet he still fought. A third arrow struck him in the middle of the chest, right through the heart. Boromir gasped and fell to his knees, unable to hold his own weight. He looked at the two young Hobbits, pain and guilt in his eyes. Orcs rushed past, overlooking the small creatures behind a tree to their left.
Merry looked at Pippin, a look of fear and anger on his face, and drew his short sword. Pippin did likewise. They charged into the ever-growing crowd of Orcs, slaying them as they half yelled, half sobbed on Boromir’s behalf.
Pippin stabbed an Orc in the stomach and drew out the blade. Merry, close by, kicked one in the leg and stabbed the foul creature in the side. He looked to Pippin, who had turned to attack another Orc; unaware that the one he had just stabbed was still alive.
“Look out!” Merry cried, but too late. The Orc hit Pippin in the back of the head with the hilt of his sword. Pippin’s eyes widened in pain, then closed as he fell to the ground. He let out a cry, and then lay still.
“Pippin! No!” sobbed Merry. “Pippin! Wake up! Pippin! Somebody help!”
Merry slew the Orc, who was bending to pick up the poor creature, and knelt down next to Pippin, sobbing. Then he saw Boromir, still gasping for breath, a few yards away.
He stopped, and looked on in horror as an enormous Orc stood in front of Boromir. The Orc slowly drew back its arrow, waiting until the Man looked him in the eyes to shoot. Boromir slowly moved his gaze from the Orc’s feet up to the arrow-tip, fear in his eyes.
Just then several others ran out from behind the trees. Two of them picked up Merry and Pippin and ran off. Merry screamed and cried for help, but no one answered. He was carried off sobbing into the thick forest.
A moment too late, Aragorn appeared. He jumped on the Orc, and the arrow meant for Boromir’s head flew up into the branches. The two fought for a few seconds, until Aragorn, nose and lip bleeding, chopped off the arm of the Orc. He then stabbed it in the stomach. It grabbed the sword and pulled it all the way through its deformed body. Aragorn pulled the sword out quickly and decapitated the disgusting creature. He ran over to Boromir, who was now on his back. Legolas and Gimli walked into the small clearing. The two looked on with sadness and pity. The two Men spoke quietly for a few minutes, and then Boromir lay still. He was dead.
Aragorn looked up to the Elf and the Dwarf, and they could see some unspoken horror under the unshed tears in his eyes.
“Merry and Pippin… they have been taken.”
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25 Comments
Wow. That was really good. Are you gonna write more? You should.
I likeyour story.
Oh I hope there will be more! I love it!
MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG!!!! It is SO good! I was actually crying! I LOVED it!!!!!!!!
OMGosh!!!!!!! SO SAD! FORTH CHAPTER IS SAD!!!!! :'( I had a tear running down my cheak! Keep writing… I wanna know wat the other 3 r going 2 say… (other three= Legolas, Gimli, and Aragorn)
Come on!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE write some more!!!!
This was a wonderful story, I was scared when Merry said Pippin was dead and very relieved to find out otherwise. I can’t wait to find out what happens next!
Great story! Update soon.
MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! NOW NOW NOW NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! write more!!!!!! hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE it! I hope it’s continued
This story is great! The drama is wonderful!
I cried as I finished the story, it was so sad! That is why I love Merry!
I liked that chapter! Will you please write more?
Really good. Poor Merry and Pippin
I loved this story! It fits so perfectly with the movie, yet it is so much more detailed of the drama going on with two young hobbits. Merry and Pip are two of my favorite characters in the LotR. I hope you will write some more fan-fic sometime! It was awesome!
can you write more please????? *sits up and begs like a puppy*
Hey, this is Steph, the author of the story. I have two more chapters done, and they’ll be up soon, but I’m having a problem with one of the chapters that still needs to be fixed… I just need this one thing that I don’t have!!! *grrr*
YAY! IT’S FINALLY DONE! *beaming like an idiot*
Great story! I liked the memory thing. Good job!
I loved the story! I had tears of joy as I read the end. I want more of your stories!! You are a greaat writer.
Beautiful! Something I needed to read, really. 🙂
Wonderful! Both the hobbitsess were just like themselves!
I love it