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daisy-like
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on: July 18, 2016 02:47
Hallo Elvish-fans!

I started to write a story in Quenya. I would be pleased if you´d like to continue writing - could become a nice project!

Here´s the link to it (I´ve uploaded it to my deviantart-account)
http://daisy-like.deviantart.com/art/Elvish-story-project-to-be-continued-by-you-622199283


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I want to give a huge, large, massive Thanks to dirk_math, who helped me with the correct grammar and tengwar, going through the whole story with me - word by word.



If you want to participate and have no deviantart-account, you can post your lines below in a comment.

Have fun with translating and writing!

[Edited on 07/24/2016 by daisy-like]

[Edited on 07/24/2016 by daisy-like]
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on: July 18, 2016 04:15
I am getting an error 404 when trying to open the link...

try putting "[url][/url]" before and after the link
-Erunámo -"Istyallo, Ilu."
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on: July 18, 2016 04:40
Thank you a lot erutan2099!

I've corrected it - should work now.
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on: July 18, 2016 02:42
I've had a quick look and noticed that you use anna (tengwa 23) far too frequently. When you need a Y just put it under the previous consonant; we only use anna if there is no consonant available.
Yassë engë lómë, anarties calali.
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on: July 18, 2016 04:17
Thanks dirk_math!

Good to know, i wasn't sure about that.
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on: July 18, 2016 08:38
If you're interested: in the Quenya course on this site there is each lesson a part about tengwar (and also in the Sindarin course if you want to be able to write in that language too).
Yassë engë lómë, anarties calali.
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on: July 23, 2016 06:38
Here's a first sequel:Image

[Edited on 07/24/2016 by dirk_math]
Yassë engë lómë, anarties calali.
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on: July 23, 2016 08:01
really great sequel to the story - love it!
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