An Unexpected Stay by elvenmaidofmirkwood
Thranduil glared slightly at his son.”You’re late.”
“Sorry Ada,” Legolas replied sheepishly.
“Legolas, Legolas, what am I to do with you? Please be on time. NOW I was asking of you to go to Imladris to send a message to Elrond in Imladris. Gaerluin and Gaerlas will escort you.”
He dismissed him with a wave of his hand.
“Legolas!” cried Elladan when he saw his friend. Oddly, he was wearing a hat. What brings the prince of Mirkwood here?And who are these other elves?”
“These two are Gaerluin and Gaerlas. As for why I’m here,a message. For your father.” He handed him the scroll.
“Ada’s been expecting this. Come on in! We can hunt and play tricks on Arwen!”
“Have you been bugging your sister again? What has she done to you?”
“Lately she mixed blue dye with our shampoo,” he took off his hat and showed his blue hair,”We need revenge!”
“I see,” Legolas smiled.”Remind me next time to bring my own.”
“No time now! Here she comes!”
“Hey Elladan…..Greetings, Prince of Mirkwood!” Arwen curtsied clumsily.”How art thou today? Yestre was pouring hard! Let me show you in!”
“I think she’s smitten with you!” Elladan whispered with a smirk.
“I supposed you would act this way when I saw Legolas,” said Elrohir, emerging through the doorway.
“I supposed so too!” said a stern voice.
“Ada!” cried Arwen and the twins.
28 Comments
Please write more this is hillarious.
Aren’t they elves? But it is still v. funny!! Can’t wait till the rest comes out!!!
I love it! Its cute and funny!
Please write more. It has me laughing with each chapter.
good story! I want to know what happens next
LOL! That is so funny! I cant wait to read the next chapter! keep up the good work!
Amanda
Hahahahaha!!! Too funny(again) I really like! Keep up nice work!! π
Ok, that was unexpected, but still funny. BUt I sense some serious Elrond bashing taking place. But in a lighthearted way, of course. π
Maybe you should add a bit more flavor and make your story flow more. It’s a bit choppy.
Keep Smiling,
Gaby
*snort, giggle, laugh, sigh* I think that if I read any more, I will laugh my heart out! π
I LOVE it! I ~*absolutly*~ can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!:D
This is so totally random. I like it, I just find it a little hard to follow what is actually happening. Getting rid of Elrond seems to be a step in the right direction. Please keep going!
Ok, now I’m thinking that you reallt like pashing all elves. But this story is still funny, just remember, there’s a fine line between funny and just plain mean. π
Is it a horse??? Anyway, I still really like it, and I can surmise from your name that you do liek elves, and it is kinda hard not to bash ’em, they’re so, umm bashable(?)
Umm, just a wee tad little bit. But I am finding it harder and harder not to srat crying I’m laughing so hard. But do remember, so are dire-hard elf fans, no dissing allowed. Ok, I’m not a die-hard,but I do like elves.
I can’t say anything else, but: FUNNY, FUNNY, and FUNNY! Write more soon!
Woohoo I got in first!! Thanks ever so much. Please adda new chapter, I want to know what Arwen does to them. Funnerness!!
Ok, it’s funny and all, but I’m finding it a little hard to follow the plot, if you get my meaning.
This /is/ a dream, right? It has just the flavour of my dreams…next thing you know, Elrond’ll get a mohawk or something like that…or some totally unrealated character’ll make a comment…vedy interesting…
Arrrghh!? What? Did Elrond escape from the madhouse? Or, did they release him because he was able to convince them that he really was pretty and stood a very good chance of winning the beauty contest? Keep those chapters coming, please. This is a fun read.
Ohhhh, the suspense kills me!!!!! WHO??? WHAT??? WHERE???? WHEN???? WHY????? IS there any meaning to life?
Well, is there gonna b more? Who the heck’s the voice?
*laughing so hard it’s hard to type, so will just try and write:* I love it man!!
Is that one of those ‘Barbie as Arwen’ dolls? lol That would be hysterical!
I can’t write any more chapters, so you will have to see ‘An Unexpected Stay: The Last Chapter’ fanfic. Sorry about that.
Um……forget what I just wrote. I guess you can have a chapter 26.
Cool story. Though I di find the story kind of hard to keep up with. Can’t wait to read the sequel!
awesome!!! i was laughing so hard1 i cant watch elrond and arwen and legolas ever again XD