Cheaper by the Fellowship by Mrs_Frodo_Baggins12
I do not own any thing. I don’t even own a LotR DVD.
Cast
Tom Baker……..Elrond
Kate Baker……..Celebriel
Norah………..Gandalf
Charlie………..Gimli
Lorain………..Haldir
Henry………..Sam
Sarah………..Eowyn
Marc………..Borimer
Jake………..Aragorn
Jessica……..Legolas
Kim………..Arwen
Mike……….Frodo
Nigel………Pippin
Kyle……….Merry
*The phone starts ringing. Celebriel answers it.*
Celebriel: “Hello? OK. Sure thing. I’ll ask Elrond. OK. Bye.”
LATER
Celebriel: “I need to ask you some thing.”
Elrond: “What?”
Celebriel: “Galadriel asked me if I could come down to Lothlorien to help her open her new spa. I know its bad timing. Oh, what do you say?”
Elrond: “Oh.”
Celebriel: “Oh?”
Elrond: “That was a good O as in OK your going.”
Celebriel: “Are you sure, I mean you’ve never been alone with the kids that long?”
Elrond: “Oh, the fellowship? I’ll be fine. It’s only a couple days right?”
Celebriel: “Really? Oh thank you so so much!” *Hugs Elrond.*
LATER
*Family and Fellowship wish Celebriel good-bye.*
Celebriel: “If any thing happens I can ride back in three days.” * Gets on horse and rides away.*
All: BYE!
Elrond: *Acting goofy trying to cheer the kids’ up.* “My plan worked she’s gone. Now I can raise you kids the way I want to!” *Rubs hands evilly.* “MUHAHAHA!!!!”
*Kids stare unamused for a second then walk away.*
END OF CHAPTER ONE.
13 Comments
This seems like a very interesting story. PM me when there is more!
Good job!!! please write more!!! I love it so far!!
Hey!!! it’s me agian please p.m. me when you write more
So far it is really close to cheaper by the dozen! I can’t wait to see what happens next. It should be interesting!
great.cheaper by the dozen is one of my fave movies.
ummm……well, not bad but try putting a bit more into it, like more detail, or more happened. wat happened between later & wats happening. & it’s ok to be random at points u know?, it makes the story fun!
awesome, i love the idea of basing it on cheaper by the dozen!!!
Looks like it will be good. Can’t wait for the next part!
v. funny beginning (such as it was) pleeeeeeeeeez add more!!!! lots more! lots and lots more!!!!!! * continues begging until the fellowship and elrond come out and hit her in the back of the head, knocking her out. Elrond: “sorry about that folks, she didn’t take her meds today!” all exit*
I LOVED IT!!PLEASE PUT MORE!!
I hope you’re planning on writing more because uh, it’s kinda short. But very good idea.
So far it seems really funny. I love the Cheaper by the Dozen movie. Keep Writing!
Good good good! Chapter 2 please!