Do you think of them? by Nevaeh__Elenath
Do you think of them?
As I lay,
Afraid to move, afraid to speak
He asks:
“Do you think of them?”
I say:
“Always.”
As I sit,
on the shoulder of an Ent
He asks:
“Do you think of them?”
I say:
“Always.”
I suit up for war
listen to the King’s great speech
She asks:
“Do you think of them?”
I say:
“Always.”
‘Tis the final step
I prepare to die
He asks
“Are you thinking about them?”
I say:
“Yes, I am.”
Frodo, Sam,
My thoughts are forever turned to you.
Beware, be safe.
I sit
In a rocking chair, in Brandyhall.
My cousin’s son asks:
“Do you remember him?”
I smile to myself then reply:
“of course.
But he is across the sea
In the land of the elves
Sam will go after him soon.”
After the chill of death
into the sun of life after it.
Pippin is by my side,
we see them come and say:
“Did you think of us?”
They smile and say:
“Always, my friends, always,”
8 Comments
Aww…*sniffles* That’s great! It is wonderfully in Merry’s character. Keep up the good work!
SonofDrogo
*tear tear* I love it!
I love your purdy poem! It’s so inspiring and it really paints a picture in my mind of Merry and the rest of the hobbits. It’s so cute! It makes me want to cry! You have wonderful talent.
love, Livik_Frodo
Thanx guys! That really means a lot! Even from you Livik_Frodo since you’re one of my best friends! Now if you don’t mind, read the rest of em and tell me what you think! please?
I loved this. Beautiful, unique, and written through pure love of the books and characters. I cannot believe you have only recently started writing poetry: this was so well done, better than many poems written by “vetrons” of poetry. It is so wonderful to hear of the love shared by Merry and Pippin, and Frodo and Sam. Well done!
*sniffles* This really portrays the friendship between the hobbits well done write more!!!!!
Tis is wonderful.This thought has crossed my mind several times and you have done a really good job writing it into poetry.
that is so so so beautiful