Elven Grief by Egoll_of_Kirshii
Stop this pain
This pain of sorrow
It comes to me
…This day…
This day never leaves
I am left behind
In this shadow of pain
…Comfort…
Comfort I need
To bring me up
From this eternal wound
It hangs on my heart
Long have they suffered
They now depart
For the pain was too great
…Too great…
Too great to bear
For one elf alone
I am now here
…Abandoned…
…Lifeless…
…In the Dark…
2 Comments
Good! I think you captured the grief Arwen would feel and expressed it in a eloquent way. 🙂
Wow…. what a deep poem!! I love the emotion in it. You write so well, please write lots more!!!!!