Eowyn's Regret by foshpickle~greenleaf
I thought you loved me
I thought you cared.
I thought we almost had something,
my love for you was there.
It was when I first saw you,
I thought you were the one.
I thought that you could love me,
you shone just like the sun.
We spent a little time together,
we talked and laughed a bit.
You told a joke, I smiled at you;
the flame in my heart was lit.
Our time together was rather short,
there was so much to be done.
But when we did have a little time,
it was aways fun.
It was a sad day when I found out,
I found that you loved her.
I never would have guessed it,
I wanted it to be me that you prefered.
I have so much going on,
my life is such a mess,
I just wanted you to hold me,
I just wanted your caress.
I don’t want to wish you bad with her,
I know that isn’t right.
But still you’ve broken my sppirit,
you’ve put out my inner light.
I’m going to go on loving you,
no matter what they say.
And even if you’re not the one,
I’ll still be waiting for my day.
~I don’t think this is my best one, but it kind of reflects what I am feeling lately, so sorry if it is crap. But please review anyways!!!~
3 Comments
Hey! I admit to wanting to have Eowyn’s head when first she showed up on the scene. But toward’s the end you do feel sorry for her. I imagine this is exactly what she would have written had she put her thoughts on words. Very good job!
Wow, that is really good! I like it!!
This is so imaginative! Capturing one heart’s emotions through something such as love is something I find quite hard to do, but I find this piece of writing has really reflected on times when the usual ‘I love you, you don’t love me’ role comes to play. : )