Fallen by _mithrim
Laughing under the moonlit trees
We sang an eldar song
In a place where no one sees
We danced the whole night long
The moon beams elegantly shone down
And the brooks flowed by
When suddenly our smiles turned to frowns
And we all let out a shrill cry
Chasing, fighting, slaying
Morgoth’s servants rode in
Running, screaming, praying
I hid from them with my kin
In the clear sky clouds come
Covering up the silver moon
The orcs capture and away drag some
While I fear imprisonment soon
My hearts speed quickened
As they slowly turned to me
And the tension thickened
As I wondered if they can see me
Calmly I stayed in place
Hoping they’ll overlook
My small hiding space
But me they roughly took
Roughly they took me away
Deep under the ground
To the dungeons dark and gray
Where I could not be found
I wept long and hard
About my future fate
I looked out the window barred
And knew it was to late
I would be soon forgot
Trapped here forever
And never even sought
Forced to work the wheel and lever
I was a fallen star, an abandoned elven child
A mere slave, a hated thrall
Taken from her home mild
To serve in the dark lords hall
The hammers and metals clanked
While the trees burned and broke
The stones ground and the wheels cranked
As we worked stroke by stroke
The whips loudly cracked
And voices screamed cries
But the work never slacked
And was often our demise
Our faces were brave and grim
But behind them hearts were breaking
Tears streamed down from our eyes dim
As inside our spirits were quaking
As our tears came rapidly falling
We could remember and crave
Our old lives that always seemed to be calling
Yet, we strived to remain brave
Time past like days as years
So slow it was cruel
My nights were filled with fears
For I was not yet I mindless fool
One night I began weep
But a gentle voice called to me
And told to take sleep
Yet, who it was I could not see
In the next cell sat a faint outline
That spoke in the elven tongue
And was of the same kin as mine
And sometimes softly sung
I got to know that voice well
And was no longer alone
We spoke of how we fell
But now a light in the darkness shone
He was a young elf
That had been taken from all he cherished
And he was much like myself
For at a time he nearly perished
He gave me a reason to give
He gave me a reason to try
He gave me a reason to live
For he was a comfort when I would cry
After time our love grew
Both quick and deep
And we both knew
Our affections we would keep
Often we would hold each others hand
As we would together dream
Of a far off and fair land
And of stars that would gleam
Once I was allowed to leave the caverns
For I was to run an errand above the ground
I breathed and free air and danced a few turns
Suddenly from behind me a heard a sound
I turned about to see a elf standing there
He was tall agile and strong
His eyes were blue and brown was his hair
I knew who he was before a second long
Meneldil! I whispered with a smile
As I looked at him for the first time in the light
There we talked for a little while
And he held me close and tight
The stars were scattered like bits of burning glass
Streaked across the sky
Lost in the great dark mass
I felt like I could fly
He pulled out a small thing
A thing that shimmered
That was attached to a string
And in my hand glimmered
It was a silver pendent he had made
Wrought in the shape of a star
And by my heart it stayed
By making this he took a risk by far
This pleasant meeting had to end
So he drew me near once in one last kiss
And we mourned that we had no time to spend
So there ended our one night of bliss
That was when we knew
The had to escape soon
When our spirits flew
At the sight of the moon
So we plotted how to be free
We knew that we would try
To escape and faraway flee
Or we would fail and die
After much planning
After much thought
After much scanning
We finally had a plot
We would go down a secret path
A forgotten twisted way
Hoping to escape their wrath
By taking no delay
That night we used his key
The unlock our rooms
And away started to flee
Hoping we wouldn’t meet our dooms
Entering an abandoned well
We started down the tunnel
It was so slick I nearly fell
For here the waters would funnel
Once through this we had past
We knew we were not yet free
The hardest challenge was last
A gate was around us as far as an eye can see
Its huge metal doors raised up high
Swarming guards surrounded it
And its spikes threatened the sky
Approaching it like shadows we flit
If it was a stroke of luck
Or just fate’s choice
A loud noise struck
And there sounded a voice
It boomed and open the gate swung
Several orcs marched through
And in their weapons flung
And a few prisoners to
We met in a quick embrace
Then we prepared run
And bolted through the space
Just at the rising of the sun
We ran away from our fears
Out away from hell
Followed by whizzing spears
But neither of us fell
Fleeing without looking back
We hoped not to be found
Away from their attack
We heard waters sound
We had fled for a while
Into the forest deep
Not yet ready to smile
Or even take some sleep
A darkness followed behind
A threat was growing
Around the forest it would wind
Our pace was slowing
For a while we set aside
Each worry and care
And enjoyed the world outside
The trees bright and fair
Underneath a malorn tree
And by the waters calm
We ceased to flee
And felt the winds balm
About us the shadows of twilight crept
As we called upon Eru
Out of joy I quietly wept
About us doves flew
The stars above shimmered
And the doves softly cooed
The light of our eyes glimmered
As bright as the mornings dew
Shortly after we were blessed
To find a small mare
Though it wasn’t the best
Both of us it could bear
Along the rode we found our needs
Not fearing hunger or thrist
The Valar answered our pleads
As we begged for them upon our knees
The days that followed passed
Without count or care
Fear was in the past
And happiness was there
Yet, a road roughens
And as a star fades
Our challednges toughened
As the enemy searched the glades
I felt that we were not alone
We were being observed
I froze like a stone
And then then quickly swerved
There were eyes in the brush
As piercing as a blade
My face went flush
As a figure entered the glade
With a scream I fled
With Meneldil at my side
My mind was filled with dread
As the light of all hope died
They chased and hunted us
Like it was all a game
Their bows were aimed at us
And arrows swiftly came
They came in like rain,
A shower of death,
A intended bane.
To take our last breath
Slowly they fell behind
We were almost out of sight
A light of hope shined
Like a star in the night
Yet, one last arrow flew
Past a mallorn tree
And in the wind blew
Before it hit me
It met its appointed mark
And pierced my side
Its point sharp and stark
Made the chase backslide
I fell to the ground
Letting out a scream
I was death bound
It was like a horrid dream
Quickly he removed it
And bore me away
Using all his whit
He found a safe place to stay
He tended to me
And told me to take rest
To the Valar I made a plea
To help their eldar distressed
As I drifted into sleep
My life I tried to keep
A tear in his eyes deep
Told me he wished to weep
Every time my side would rise
In a steady, full breath
I would see in his eyes
He was thanking Elbereth
Slowly I began to heal
With tender patience
I could begin to feel
A rising confidence
Through the dark and dangerous paths
Past rivers and shimmering lakes
We made our way to Doriath
Treading the easiest paths for my sake
Through the blizzards of Anglon
He was my warmth and hope
His gentle hand made me walk-on
And helped me to cope
Finally at the last sunset
The woods became fair
And there was no need to fret
For I had been there
We had reached our goal
Our dreams had come true
I could rest my soul
The shadows we had past through
2 Comments
Omg, that poem was awesome, i really like it.Please continue it soon…
Wow, just wow