Friends Never Say Goodbye by admin
Friends never say goodbye
Disclaimer: I own nothing(sadly) that in Lord of the Rings or was written by J.R.R.Tolkien.
Aragorn looked around him. He was coming back from a trip to Mirkwood with his friend, Legolas. They were now heading to Rivendell to catch up with Gandalf and see how the hunt for Gollum was going. The vile creature new where the Ring was and Gandalf needed that information.
“What do you think Gandalf wants to tell us?” Legolas said, breaking into Aragorn’s thoughts. “He seemed very insistent that this was important enough to cut our visit short.”
“I’m sure it’s very important.” Aragorn replied, not sure whether to laugh or frown at the expression on his friends face. Legolas was very grumpy at having to cut the time with his family short. He always loved being with his brothers, Remnul and Cyro.
“He could have come to Mirkwood.” Legolas grumbled. At this Aragorn burst out laughing.
“And travel two more days? You know how much he hates riding!”
“So he would rather inconvenience us?”
“Apparently”
Legolas huffed “So much for the courtesy of the Wizards!”
Suddenly he stopped and cocked his head as though listening for something. Aragorn paused as well. He heard nothing. This was what put him on edge. Usually you could hear animals chirping and elves laughing in the distance. But now there was nothing. Aragorn looked at his friend worriedly, waiting for him to say something When he did, it chilled him to the core.
“Orcs.”
A/N: I’ll update this as soon as I know people like it so you people better get your little fingers typing some feedback!
109 Comments
This is a good story. I can’t wait to find out what happens next.
I hope even more of the chapters come.
this is great.please post the next chapter very soon:)
PLEASE keep writing! I wanna know what happens!!!!
Oooo!Good story! Must see the rest when it is done.
Very nice! I wish the chapters were a little longer, but it was good. Very nice detail.
Very nice! I love the suspense, pleassse write the rest
This is good, except it takes it away when you use profanity llike that. It takes away from the story.
Also, I just thought I would tell you, you meant ‘knew’ but you put ‘new’.
But all in all, it is good. Very good. I can not wait for the next chapter!!!!
Please hurry up and finish it. now that i’ve read the begining i have to know the end.
ooooo!…that’s good. i want to read more!
Your story is well written! I love it!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!
Namarie
i love this story please update soon.
It’s good. Can’t wait for the end.A.
It was very good… and I hope that you finish it up…. but it would be nice if you left out the slash. Please? Oh well, I will keep checking up on it!
pretty cool hurry and finish it, i am glad thet u didn’t include idiot gay crap! thaks!
Do whatever you plan on doing, but just do it 😉 In other words, WRITE ON! ^_^
love your story, hope to see more!
OMGosh! U HAVE GOT TO HURRY! I’m loving this story and I CAN’T WAIT to finish it! PLEASE hurry!!!!!! I GIVE IT A 20 out of 10!!!! (Yes i know thats impossib le but thats wat i give it!
It is a very good story but please no slash
This is good! Keep going!
This is good! Keep going!
Counfused…Why was Elrond calling Aragorn his son? *very confused*
Very nice! I like it a lot; so please update soon!
OMM, you’ve GOT to update this, IT IS SO GOOD! PLEASE UPDATE!
~KKVGGR
Please update,,, im on pins and needles
I liked it, but please, please finish it! I want to find out what happens to Legolas and Aragorn…
@Lady Elwing, Elrond raised Aragorn like his own son…if that clears up confusion…
i love this story!! it shows how true a friend legolas is. i cannot wait for the next chapter so i can see what happens!
More! More!
I like this very much! I know that I’ve commented before, but I just felt that I should reinforce how much I am enjoying your story. It adds an element of suspense to the story when you have to wait for the next update: as long as you don’t have to wait too too long!
OMGosh!!!!! I NEED 2 KNOW HOW THIS ENDS!!!! I’M GONNA GO CRAZY WAITING!!!!!
A good story but it needs more depth
try to get into the mindset of the characters from the movie. If u add
it could become a good backnovel itself.
NO!!!!! Legolas can’t! PLEASE SAY IT ISN’T HAPPENING! NO!!!!!!!!!! :'( BUT GREAT STORY! I CANB’T WAIT TILL THE END! Please say its a surprise ending and Legolas makes a deal to come back to life (like in a Greek Myth)
I really like how you’ve handled it so far. It is intriguing, and entertaining “Don’t die on me adan, you owe me dinner.” lol. But, if you put any slash in it, I may just get very VERY angry!
last time i read this, there were chapters 7 and 8. what happened to them?
OMGosh! STILL REALLY GOOD! I kinda LOVE the change… I CAN’T WAIT TO KNOW HOW IT ENDS!!!!!!!
UR WRITINGS DA BEST!!!
Its a good start to the story – get writing more please!!!!!!!
🙂
That is so sad! I love the way you’re doing this story. I just hope you don’t kill my prince (I couldn’t live without him 🙁 ).
anytime now. waiting for the ending chapters
::sniffling:: I won’t cry…I won’t cry…….Aw, screw it!!!!! :::Sobbing uncontrollably::: :*(:*(:*(:*(:*(:*(:*( :_(:_(:_(:_( How incredibly unfair!!!! How could you, you cruel, inhuman monster!!!!! (lol, just joking, ya know)
I liked it!! Please write more soon! I can’t wait and I really want to see what happens. Write more please!!
Really awesome story! Good thing I am not Legolas obsessed or I might be really Mad. Well at least Aragorn didn’t die….
good for u u killed legolas! i won’t kill u! not that i hate him or anything but he’s really annoying so…good job yay!:)
IS THIS THE END OF THE STORY?!?!? it can’t be!!!
🙁 it was very sweet and sad, emotional
You KILLED ARAGORN!! how could you?!? poor Arwen! (Great story though!!!)
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 🙁 im gonna cry. That was soo good yet soooooooo sad!
::: a whole armful full of rotten lettuce and other various heavy objuects held at the ready::: How could you?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!? First Legolas, now Aragorn?!?!?!!?!?! Dude, what’s wrong with you?! Do you have any idea how much you just changed the fate of Middle Earth!!!
(lol, j/k, I like the story, but why so much heart break, so much sorrow?!)
*SOBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB*
HOW COULD YOU?
oh man! you killed legolas AND aragorn! you’re on some kind of death roll or something. Go you!
I need to read the next chapters! I’m like totally pulled into this story!
mahn you’re gonna get some hate replies from aragorn lovers. first you killed legolas now aragorn. lol
well atleast you did arwen a favour to go the undying lands but still mahn, that was… lol. i dont know what to say.
good job? lol lataz
let me know if you update.
PLEASE make another chapter where Mandos feels sorry for them and sends them back PLEASE! so sad
I loved it. I like when my favorite characters die. And(please, nobody hurt me for this) I have always had a strange desire for Aragorn to die. A great story!!!!
First Legolas, now Aragorns. You said you learned your leason when you killed Legolas, killing Aragorn doesn’t bring Leggy back. (crying uncontrollably at the thought of Aragorn dieing) I love your story though, write more!!!!!!
Can’t you make him come back to life?! I thought it was a very good story. Aragorn and Legolas are among my favorite characters and I think that they deserved a story of thier own.
“sob” This story is soooo sad. (Your right the chapters are a little mixed, but I still looove the story!)
short, yet sweet! i like th fact u put it Leggy’s bro’s, i didnt kno he had ne, an i hav the books!!!! but even if he didnt, it still a nice touch! keep going! the fact that u left us all hanging makes us want 2 hear/read more! go emily!
Aw thats so sad, but what was next
I’m crying!! why did he have to die!! He’s an Elf! they don’t die!!!
Good writing. Its really sad.
I was in tears since the middle of the second last chapter. Please, please, please write the next chapter soon. It’s a great story. PM me when the new chapter is posted, please. xxx
ErúveElen
I have just read all of the chapters even though it is very sad as Legolas is my favorite character I thought it was great.
need…chapter ten *rocks back and forth then notices people are staring* I’m…uh…okay…
Will you please write another chapter? Please?
i don’t know why i have an ironic sense of humor and i thought this was sort of funny
Once again, I was in tears. How some one could do that to me of all people( I don’t even cry at funerals…) is beyond me. A very well written peace of work. Well done you, Yay! xxx
ErúveElen
i loved it all it’s all brilliant.
you should write another it is sooooo good
elanor
HOW COOD U?!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! even tho u told me, i just can’t belive u reely killed them BOTH!!!!! whut will the Council be like now, i’ll hav 2 wait an c……………………but, emily, how? why?!?
I loved this story… I cried, even though I am an avid Leggie fan… your right. He had to die. Very good job
WWWWWWHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! I loved it by the way. WWWWWWWHHHHHHAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!
Good story. Depressing. So much for the Fellowship as we know it, huh? Anyway, it was a great idea. When’s the next chapter? What’s gonna happen to Arwen’s baby, and the crown of Gondor? Write more.
Very nice. i kinda expected one person to die but not both of them
what happens next…please hurry with your next chapter if you have anymore……..please!!!
pleez, pleez update soon!I need to know what happens!!!
I love this story, I really do, but you’ve gotta stop slaughtering your characters. With the way this is going, Arwen may die of grief next, and that (plus Aragorn and Legolas’ deaths) would probably kill her father and brothers, not to mention Tharanduil and his sons, and having Arwen and Elrond and Elrohir and Elladan die would probably kill Celeborn and/or Galadriel, and then, well, you get the point. I don’t want to have to cry anymore :-(. So please do something happy to them.
Very good i like how it makes it kind of suspensful right where you stopped
Noooo! I just read your story for the first time…please tell me that it is not the end! I know that you can find a way to bring them back to life….right? My only suggestion…Arwen seems a bit off to me…a bit too frippery maybe.
*crying uncontrollably* This story is soooo sad! I love it soooooo much!!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!!
I’m sobbing uncontorllably. This is such a good story but it is so sad, this is almost to the point of ROTK sobbing. I cannot wait to read your final chapter please let it be a happy one though.
LothlomeElenfana
the last three chapters had me crying, they were so touching. r u going to write more??
Another chapter! Praise the lord! That means that they aren’t *actually* going to die…right? No, that would be too sad. This is a great story, keep up the good work! (And don’t let Aragorn die!)
That was really sad, but touching. Really nice speech by Arwen. Keep it up, man! Those stories are wicked!
your story makes no sense.. i don’t get it… maybe its just me
Love it? LOVE IT?? I ADORE it!!! It’s wonderful!! I was crying liek a babe by the end*sniffle* just beautiful. 🙂
Good crud! That’s really good for a 13 year old. Well done, once again, I am in tears. xxx
ErúveElen
ok this sounds really good so far!!! please continue the story!!! i love stories with aragorn and legolas in them, and with character deaths; they always seem to make me cry!!! please continue!!! 😀
This story is making me cry so much,it’s very good and though yor’re young, you’re very talented =)
I like it but I have a tiny complaint. I don’t think Aragorn would be “chilled to the core”. He would just be sort of grim and ready for battle. And it would be nice to make it longer. Otherwise it was pretty good. Keep writing!!! 🙂
No, no, no, no, no! So thats *IT*? They’re just DEAD?? We’re looking for happy endings here!
Well, written, good plot, but here’s a side note–I’m in love with aragorn! I’m going to marry him! How am I supposed to marry him if he’s “dead?!” 🙁 Other than that, good story. 😛
hiya!! one thing bout th last line: it’s “Great” not “Right”…..oh well! not that big a deal i guess! super!! i loved th way u had Elrohir be Aragorn and Cyro be Leggy! heehee!! MORE MORE!! ~ene
I loved it! It made me cry!
OMG!!! THat is great!!! PERFECT end to a great story!!! Had me bawling like a babe. Wonderful, but please tell em they get home all right! PLZ!!!!*puppy-dog eyes*
super!!!! just one question: how did th hobbits get from Bree to Rivendell? how did they defeat th Black Riders on top of Weathertop? beca’s confused……~ene & mora
…I’m still confused….I guess ut just me
That’s really good!
='( OMG that is the most beautiful yet tear-jerking thing I have EVER read!!! The amount of times I came about a millimetre to crying… you have wonderful talent there; you really ought to be an author! Well done!
THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!xxx
ErúveElen
I love all of your chapters. You should write more stories. It is so moving, the way you place the words. I couldn’t have done better.
OMG! I love how you had Cyro starting to tell the hobbits about Aragorn and Legolas! Here’s an idea… you write a *sequal*…and bring back Aragorn and Legolas!! I’m serious here…I’m sure you could pull it off. Please??
I loved this story and reccommended it to all my friends, whether they luv lotr like me or not! It is FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Cries* omg… that is so flipping sad.. ugh, so you basicly made Aragorn and Legolas different people eh? *blows nose* i really did cry when Legolas died, ugh, i dont need that… Great story anyway, *balls*
Very good. Im in 8th grade myself and i am still a
novice writer. You said you go to San Marcos middle school? that near me. anyway just one
question who is the hope of men now? who will save them? who will weild Anduril? those things were nagging me but all-in-all a very good Fanfic.
That was beautiful!!!
*Wipes the tears gathering in her eyes* I hate to cry, but hey, it’s for a good cause right? *grins*
Bueatiful, magnificent, stupendous, And quite splendid, I must say!!!!!!
Thank you for this beautiful story!!!!!!
God bless!!!!
OMG!! i almost started crying. this is a touching story. thank you so much for writing it. one thing, NEVER KILL LEGOLAS AGAIN!! sorry, got a little carried away…
oh my god it was great!i luv it
I tast salt. No. I dont beleve it. I’m actually crying.
That is so sad, how they where together in life and together in death. But that really got me was at the at the end when Cyro starts telling frodo about it and he says ‘ there were two friends, an elf and a man. Their names were Aragorn and Legolas.’ it just makes you realise how different things would have been if that did happen. Aragorn and Legolas where two major characters in LotR but in this story, they never got to meet Frodo, Legolas never got to become such friends with Gimli.
They are just a memory, they have left nothing but a imprint in out hearts.
Showing how it all turned out the same, yet totally diferent is just so sad. They should be there with the fellowship, yet they are not.
i like it!! i want to hear more!!! please write more