Darkness.
It overwhelmed my everything. My frightened candle flame guttered out under the suppressing quiet of utter night. I floated for a moment in black obliviousness. And then a small thought fluttered toward me, and alighted gently, like a knife blade scrapes a throat, like a horrific butterfly. He is here.

Fear.
It overwhelmed my everything. My frightened mind guttered out under the suppressing quiet of icy terror. I floated for a moment in black ice. And then a vast thought soared toward me, and alighted fiercely, like an eagle hits its prey, like a demonic lion. He has breathed on me.

And I turned, slower than honey, faster than wind. And I saw him. And he was vast and black and fear and darkness and hate. And I heard him.

His voice was like black knives on black rock. It towered on its own, alone and miserable.

And he said, “I know you.”

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Please review. This is my very first attempt at a fanfic, and I need some honest opinions, on what to keep and what to change. Thank you very much for reading it and I hope it wasn’t too unbearable for you.

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