Legolas and his Babysitter by elfinmist
“Legolas get back here!” Aredail shouted chasing after a young hyper Prince Legolas. “NO!” His voice rang. Legolas ran around the house at top speed with Aredail right behind him. Legolas sped out the door and under a lifted root getting dirt all over him. Aredail didn’t see the root and tripped over it. Aredail thwacked his head on the ground and Legolas ran off into the woods. “Legolas!” Aredail shouted and ran after him. Being a babysitter for Legolas was tiring. Aredail went to the clearing where he normally found Legolas. Legolas had doubled back, got his little bow and was hiding in a tree. Not really knowing how to shout Legolas did what he saw the elder Elves do. He cocked his bow and took aim. He let the bowstring go. Aredail yelped with pain as he pulled the arrow out of his butt. “Legolas get down here now!” Legolas obeyed. When Aredail went to heal himself quickly Legolas went nuts. Aredail caught him and went to bathe the young prince. Aredail looked like he had a bath instead of Legolas.
Lady Galadriel was visiting Mirkwood. Aredail, desperate to put the child to sleep ran to her room. He knocked on her door. “Yes Aredail?” She asked as she opened the door. “How do you put this evil demand spawn of King Thraduil’s to sleep?” He asked gesturing to Legolas, whom he was holding under one arm. “Give him here.” Aredail obeyed her quickly. Lady Galadriel cradled Legolas and began to sing a lullaby. “Rock a by baby on the tree top. When the wind blows the cradle will rock. When the bow breaks the cradle will fall. And down will come baby cradle and all.” Aredail stared in utter disbelief. He took the sleeping ‘evil demand spawn of King Thraduil’s’ and put him to bed.
22 Comments
That was pretty good! I started to just about roll off of my chair! Very creative, but a little short however. I LOVE you young Legolas! Please, write more. π
very cute. i CAN imagine legolas like this when he was a child. write more!!!!!
AWSOME! I loved it! it made him sound so hyper and cute as a little kid! nice job! keep up the good writting. it shows another side to legolas. π a childhood side.
That is sooooo cute! I love it! Its funny!
I love this story. It’s funny immagining Legolas as a little troublemaker.
Its so cute!
I love it! I could see Legolas doing those things, I laughed so hard! Its really good!
the stuff u have written is so cute π
its realli nice. it makes me think of my little brother, except he has black hair and brown eyes. π
yoour stories is hilarious!!!!ans SO cute!!!!!!!!! pleeeeze write more chapters!!! cant wait to se what noughty Legolas does next;-) u are a GREAT writer:-D
Realy good. I love it so much and I can’t wait for the other chapters. Thank you so much. This realy made my day when I read this.
Lady Lilly.
lol. i like it
cooool! i ave exams next week. I pitty u.
Interesting.
I want MORE!!!!!!!!!!! PLEEEEEEZ!!!!!!!!! these things are addicting!
Cool! this one is funny! i hope your going to continue it, i want to hear elronds talk to his boys. lol!
This made me explode in laughing pieces on the floor! To think, Legolas would be so FUNNY! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!! π
Lol! That was funny! *evil demon spawn of Thranduil* Nort! Should maybe be a bit longer though.
Ok, My honest opinion is that while you have farly good ideas, you need to work on your style. Try to add some sytaxical florishes. maybe a few Alliterations or illutions. over all it was kind of flat and sounded amiture. Great starting ideas though! It just needs a little work. Keep writing!
Lol very cute. Keep going!!
I love this story! It’s sooooo cute! Please write more.
Love it, Now I have a view of Legolas as a child.
Nice. I can magine Legolas being such a brat as a little kid . . .boy can I ever!! I’m just glad most kids only imagine those kinds of pranks and don’t really put them into action!