Many Partings by Celebrianna
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This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the private enjoyment of Council of Elrond story readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.**
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It was now several days since the marriage of Aragorn and Arwen and the celebrations in the city were winding down. The newly wedded couple was keenly cognizant of the fact that they would soon be parting with their friends, some for a little while, and others forever. Since Aragorn had been king for several months preceding the wedding, many decisions regarding his realm were already executed. As such, he elected to delegate routine decisions of his kingdom to his council members for as long as Arwen’s family continued in Minas Tirith. And so, to the good fortune of the Fellowship members and his new kin, he dedicated many hours to their entertainment.
In the day past, Aragorn and Arwen had accompanied their guests on an extensive tour of Minas Tirith. Already most of the damage rendered to the city during the Siege was completely repaired and the city was a reflection of its earlier self in the days of Lord Denethor, former steward of Gondor. Legolas and Gimli had recently pledged their assistance to Aragorn to restore Minas Tirith to a beauty surpassing that of Minas Tirith of old, even during the days of Isildur. However, despite the promised enhancement to the city, it was still a beautiful image to behold: a sparkling white city designed in numerous circular levels.
Arwen took great pleasure in acquainting herself to her new home, much to her husband’s gratification. He was pleased to witness the delight with which she questioned their guide about the changes implemented in the city since Isildur’s reign. The thought had occurred to him that the transition for her might be difficult but his fears were much allayed by her enthusiasm. He knew that the days to come would be difficult for them both and it was comforting to know that at least Arwen would be able to adjust comfortably to her new surroundings.
He had personally overseen the necessary arrangements in the Royal Suite to facilitate the anticipated needs and pleasures of his betrothed before her arrival. In hindsight, he felt that his labor was sanguinely rewarded by the ease with which she succumbed to her new environs. Nevertheless, there was one thought that still weighed heavily upon his mind. The day of many partings, from family and friends, was fast approaching. Eomer was set to arrive within three days to bear King Theoden’s body back to Rohan and when he departed, their entire party of friends was set to depart with him.
Ever sensible of the precious little time left to spend with their companions, Aragorn and Arwen made good use of their time with them. Indeed, Arwen shared many affectionate conversations with Galadriel during their daily walks in the garden situated in the rear of the Royal residence. During these walks, Galadriel imparted many words of wisdom regarding the governance of a realm and its people. Most importantly, however, she gently emphasized Arwen’s need to cherish every moment of her new life with Aragorn now that she was also subject to the doom appointed to men. But Arwen ardently assured her that she was quite determined to live life to its fullest; she could not soon forget the many years of long-suffering and labor; the harvest indeed was a worthy recompense for past anxieties.
On the second day before they were scheduled to depart for Rohan, Galadriel walked with Arwen in the garden as the sun began its descent. It was a beautiful day; the sky was a clear, crisp blue and the wind blew lightly. The gentle rustling of leaves, the chirping of birds in the surrounding trees, and the splashing sound of the fountain located at the center of the garden were the only sounds that filled the air. Both ladies had been engaged in a light pleasurable conversation about the surrounding flowers and trees when Galadriel decided to broach a subject that she had hesitated to introduce in the past several days.
Clasping Arwen’s hand, she led her to one of the benches sheltered by a tall ancient tree. She patted the seat next to her and Arwen complied. Still clasping Arwen’s hand, Galadriel turned to face her. Arwen looked at Galadriel with a searching expression. Galadriel smiled and Arwen saw the unshed tears shining in her grandmother’s eyes. She gently squeezed Galadriel’s hand as a sign of understanding.
“My dearest Evenstar,” whispered Galadriel while smoothing Arwen’s hair from her face as her voice betrayed her emotions. “If only your mother could witness your felicity.”
Arwen smiled but her eyes were likewise filled with tears. For a moment her eyes were cast down at her hand clasped within her grandmother’s grasp; then the wretched tears began to flow steadily. She looked up and her lips trembled as she said, “But would she have been pleased? Grandmother, I cannot tell you what I have suffered in mind fearing her reception of my choice. My conscience condemns me, though my heart does not.”
Galadriel pulled Arwen close as she cradled her head on her shoulder; she sighed. The inner turmoil of emotions she was experiencing overwhelmed her greatly. Gently stroking Arwen’s hair, she turned and planted a kiss atop her head. At length, she spoke as the tears flowed silently.
“Child, no one who has ever stood in your place would be any less tormented. But the higher purpose of destiny is no respecter of persons. Your union with Elessar was ordained for a noble end; I am also persuaded that with great sacrifice therein lies great love. Celebrian may never fully comprehend your decision and her grief may never be lessened; but her matchless love for you might yet enable her to overcome.”
Turning the side of her cheek to rest on Arwen’s hair, Galadriel added in a resigned tone, “But let us afflict our hearts no further by dwelling on this matter. Celebrian may yet receive tidings of you in the years to come and that, at least, will suffice for the woeful days.”
In her heart, Arwen despaired. “I cannot bear to think of the separation to come,” she whispered almost involuntarily. But almost immediately she rallied her spirits before passionately adding, “My love for Estel and his love for me will sustain me; that must be my consolation.”
Galadriel smiled at Arwen’s comment. She continued to smooth Arwen’s hair as she said, “And no greater comfort there is. I have loved him dearly through the years and I am entirely confident in his great love for you. He is an honorable man. Elrond says rightly that he resembles Elendil, the tall, in words and deeds. There is very little else that would give me greater pleasure than witnessing the fruit of your unwavering patience endured through these many years.” She sighed, as she momentarily reflected. “But,” said she, “I am at last weary of Middle-earth and go I must to Valinor for much needed rest and recovery.”
Arwen turned to observe her and for the first time she discerned the weariness and sorrow in her grandmother’s eyes. Her heart quailed; the futility of her hope was forcibly impressed upon her mind; all hope of once again seeing her grandmother was overthrown; she was now grievously convinced that her grandmother would soon diminish and journey into the West. But before she could succumb to the overwhelming grief that threatened, Galadriel spoke.
“This will not do! ” she declared. “Let us speak of things that are more edifying. There are many years of joy to come and my heart forebodes well. And if you can allow the foolish hopes of a dear grandmother, you might yet meet again your sundered kin.”
Arwen smiled faintly. “I should never dare to hope, Grandmother, lest hope ventured is bitterly denied.”
Galadriel gently smoothed the tears from Arwen’s face. “Nevertheless, I think we can both agree that while hope underlies our sorrows, the journey is somewhat lightened.” She rose to her feet and stretched out her hand to Arwen. “Might we continue? It is such a beautiful evening!”
They continued to take a turn around the garden, walking in mutual silence and reverence to the surrounding beauty. Galadriel was the first to speak as she placed an arm around Arwen’s shoulder, hugging her close as they strolled.
“I think my dear that your heart will be gladdened by new tidings,” she averred.
Arwen’s curiosity was stirred. “New tidings?” asked she, scrutinizing her grandmother’s face.
Galadriel’s smile broadened as she hugged Arwen closer to her. “Melian is to remain with you in Minas Tirith,” she enthusiastically disclosed.
“Melian!” Arwen excitedly exclaimed. “Why have she never spoken of this?”
“We desired to reveal it only in that moment when it would afford the greatest pleasure. There is much happiness to be derived from giving and hearing these tidings, especially during this time of grievous partings.” Galadriel examined her grand daughter’s countenance. “I hope I have chosen well!”
Arwen lips parted in a brilliant smile. “I assure you that there is no small pleasure in all this that you have relayed. But is it certain? I can scarcely allow myself to accept it!”
Arwen’s spirit was much elated by the news. Milan was her grandfather Celeborn’s niece; a relationship established through his sister. Her parents now resided in Valinor with her other siblings. Though she was Arwen’s senior by a few decades, a close bond had developed between the two ladies during Arwen’s sojourn in Lothlorien with her grandparents. She thought it would be wonderful to have Milan with her as a close friend and a link to the elven world that was rapidly fading.
Galadriel’s voice forced Arwen from her brief reverie. “It is already settled between her and Elessar!” she confirmed. “I admit that it gladdens my heart that there will be at least two left from the Eldar days to teach your children well.” She abruptly halted her stroll and turned to Arwen, “There is much that they will have to learn about their ancestry. However, I fear that if good records are not kept, your descendents will consider the achievements of their ancestors nothing short of myth.”
But Arwen smiled curiously at Galadriel. “It seems grandmother, that Father has neglected to share his recent endeavors with you,” she gently teased. “These past months, he has commandeered a diverse collection of records to create a family library in the Royal Residence. Estel and I spoke of this before he departed Imladris a year ago. At that time, our hope seemed vain. Nevertheless, as our lot was invariably to be cast with the foolish, we persisted is speaking of this concern. When tidings came that the Ringbearer was successful in his quest, I took counsel with my father regarding our hope. Though I could not say if my request was more of pain than pleasure to him, I discerned some element of approbation in his spirits. Thenceforth, with an evident labor of love, he spent many hours gathering and building an impressive collection. As we speak, he and Estel are arranging the records in the room designated for this purpose.”
Galadriel smiled. “I should have known that you would have given thought to this.” Then, as though prompted by the soft sunset that graced the aging sky, she quickly reminded Arwen of the evening ahead. “King Eomer, I understand, has arrived in Minas Tirith.”
“Yes!” Arwen gravely replied. “Our departure hastens with his coming.” Galadriel gently pressed her hand. “Grandmother, perhaps I ought to have voiced my gratitude before, but I want you to know that Estel and I are ever sensitive of the role you have played in initiating our beautiful journey; your support throughout the years has been a source of strength for us. Even when the odds were multiplied against us, you encouraged us.”
“Child, the only thanks I ask is that you both treasure every moment of the years to come. It is reward enough to have witnessed your renewed pledge of love to Elessar, and he to you, at that wonderful ceremony, near the White Tree of Nimloth, several days ago. At long last you were both able to fulfill that pledge made so long ago, upon the hill of Cerin Amroth, when you plighted your troth and forsook the twilight.”
Arwen smiled as she softly kissed her grandmother on the cheek. “How shall I endure without you? Tis cruel indeed!”
“The love of your husband and the joy of your children will sustain you,” Galadriel affirmed.
“I do believe it is as you say, but I do foresee moments of dejection,” Arwen admitted. “Oh, how I shall miss you!”
73 Comments
beautiful beautiful beautiful!! 🙂 your descriptive skills are absolutely brilliant! well done!
I found this story after 14 chapters had been posted, so I was able to read all of them one right after the other. I want a chapter 15 to read! and a 16, and so on. I checked to read what other reviewers had said and was shocked to only see one. Shame on us. This story is very worthy of many praises; so from me to you, Celebrianna, WELL DONE!
Sooo beautiful. I’m choked up even as I was when I first read the Appendices after Return of the King, back in the late 60’s. Please post another chapter soon.
You certainly don’t walk this road alone! I love this story!! Definitely one of my fav. Your character are excellent, and the whole story is Tolkish 😉
Very good story. Continue, please!
Chapter 16 was an unexpected new twist. Thoroughly engrossing, but leaves one hungry for more!
This story just gets better and better with each new chapter. I find myself eagerly awaiting the next one.
Please have “Many Partings” published when you have finished writing it.
I definitly want a copy!
wow.. that’s all I can say for the moment… I usually read the book fanfic section, but I’m glad I decided to start on the movie one too…
really well done!
I love this story soooo much!!!! Please, continue… I want more chapters!
Chapter 18 was really, really good! When I added it to my documents folder, I noticed that it was 4 pages long (using Arial 8.5 font in Word), making 47 pages, so far, for me to read over and over again. Have you submitted this elsewhere? If not, you might consider it. ff.net is an excellent site and many of the CoE writers post there as well as here. This story is worthy of being read by more than just the members of the Council of Elrond.!
After being off-line for a fortnight (thanks to a virus that *totally* corrupted my Windows ME, rendering it officially *dead*), it was a pleasant surprise to get back on-line (with my old *snail-slow* ‘puter) and find not only one wonderful chapter, *does dance ‘cos you mentioned me* but two! *dances some more, singing softly, I’ve got joy, joy, joy, down in my heart* Ooooooh, bliss. Thank you, Celebrianna. *Hugs* â€
This story gets better every time! PLEASE HURRY with the next chapter!
Excellent story-gifted writer!
Personally, I don’t understand why there aren’t more reviews. This is, in my opinion, one of the best stories that is here at the CoE. I’m thoroughly enjoying every word of it! I’d like to see a little romance between Nessa and Amandil. :·D Are you going to do any mentioning of Legolas and Gimli in Fangorn? Maybe Legolas could say something to Gimli about missing Melian.
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I like the story. This is a time that is neglected, so it’s fun to read “what if”. Just one thing, the dialogue just doesn’t ring true for the characters, IMHO.
I was blown away by chapter 21. The marvelous descriptions of Minas Tirith and the royal home. Wow! Lady, take a bow! I felt like I was really there, seeing it through Nessa’s eyes. Lovely.
I like the form of dialogue that you’ve chosen to use in this story. Sometimes the characters seem a little ‘stilted’ in their conversations with others, but it seems to me that they are talking to people that they are not intimately familiar with. I mean, the conversations between Morwen and Nessa. They’re loving, but not entirely comfortable with each other because of Nessa’s life style. Aragorn and Arwen are obviously in love, but elves are more formal in their manner of speaking, even among themselves, than are humans. Estel might as well be an elf because of his upbringing, but he is also able to interact comfortably with the other races because of his ranger training. Éowyn and Faramir are, obviously, two people who love each other but are completely unused to being in love, or being loved in return. Their conversations still show a formality that will change after they are married.
Your impression of the personalities agrees with mine. That’s one of the reasons that I like this story sooo much. The people of Minas Tirith were surprised by the familiarity of the speech of the hobbits when they talked to people. It seems to me that the humans of Gondor and Rohan, for the greater part, were quite formal in the way they spoke to each other. That, quite possibly, extended into their family lives as well. The characters of the people show through the dialogue you’re giving them, just fine! IMHO
Patricia â€
This is a fantastic story, one of my favourites. As for the matter of dialogue, as long as you don’t fully twist their personalities eg Eowyn becomimg weak and cowardly, I don’t mind. I’m really happy with everything so far. Please do keep writing.
I really enjoyed your description of how much is entailed in the reconstruction of a city, and a whole country, after a big war. I had to reach for my dictionary a few times; I love stories that expand my vocabulary and give me a challenge!
Well done, Celebrianna, very well done. I also enjoyed the little hints of romantic thinking.
*does happy dance upon seeing a new chapter* 😀 But… 🙁 & :(( at thought of no weekly updates after Chapter 23. *sigh* I hope you achieve your personal goal, but am feeling selfish. *spanks hand* Enough of that… on to the review.
A chatterbox son for Prince Imrahil. That’s priceless. Erchirion sounds a lot like the happy-go-lucky spirit of Pippin, who knows no stranger. His presence will be very good for the reclusive Nessa. Too bad, though, he interrupted her conversation with Amandil. Ah, well. They have time, more than average mortals. He’s Dúnedain and so, presumedly, is she, since her father was a Ranger from the North.
Avallon, the master chef. I laughed at his… fussiness. I would love to taste his cooking, though. Personal chef to Elrond. Yummmm!
>:D< <=====hugs Patricia â€
Ah, the angst! Cast adrift in a sea of despair! Poor Melian; poor Legolas (?); poor me (& your other fans). What is going through the Prince’s mind?! “a woman on whom he had attached all his hopes for a soul mate several months before and who was now unattainable through his own unyielding sense of honor.” *What!?!?* This is torture, you know that, don’t you, Celebrianna? :sob:
The growing friendship between Nessa and Amandil is wonderful, though. And the elaborate preparations for the New Year’s Ball sound spectacular. I can barely wait to read your descriptions of the new ball dresses for the attending ladies. Arwen’s giving a picnic for her servants and their familes was a lovely touch. She is such a graceous Queen. *hugs, and hopes that the next month will fly by* Patricia â€
The suspense is killing me. Do you remember how you felt when watching FotR and you had to wait a year for TTT…well that’s how I feel waiting for the next chapter!!!!
Excellent writing. This is by far my favorite Fanfic.
I absolutely love your story, Celebrianna and cant wait to see your next chapter..sorry it took me almost a month to review it but i had to catch up with 25 chapters!Lol!but i really love it and your style is perfect…the dialogues to me are very well written.
my favourite chapter so far has to be Bitter partings i think…its so sad and moving..i love it…but i also loved the funny dance bit!so cute!lol!just keep up the great work and…post a new chapter soon!!
*jumps around happy* OMG when i logged here and saw 26 chapters i thought YEAH!!!lol!sorry!its amazing i love it!!omg who is this elf??!!!but im afraid you will keep us waitin some more bfore lettin us know it!!!gosh the suspance is killing me!!but i do love this!it was a worthwhile waiting!!great!i loved the letter part!!sorry i m not that good at reviewing!
Amazing! I started reading this when chapter 24 was posted but didn’t have time to review until now. Your story is perfect; I love every element of it, the style, tone, diction, detail, dialogue, and most of all your loyalty to Tolkien. This is the first fanfic I’ve read which does not at all contradict the original plot or character personalities. Your interpretation of the characters mirrors my own and I respect you for leaving their dignity and sense of honor in tact. I also enjoy reading about all your new characters, they fit into the story flawlessly, Melian is my favourite. Speaking of whom, I realize that there is a yet unexplained but valid reason for her not being able to be with Legolas but I hope it is resolved soon I want so much to see them together until the end. The ending to the last chapter was like a cliffhanger, I can’t wait for the explanation and the rest of the ball, the anticipation for which has been building up for many chapters. I really hope you continue this until the departure of the Last Grey Ship, it would be sad if it ended sooner. Whatever you plan to do with this tale in the future I will continue to read most eagerly till the last word, well done Celebrianna and thank you so much.
Another wonderful chapter!Well done Celebrianna!!
Dear Celebrianna, you have kept us waiting for this chapter but it was worth it…i simply love this and i cant tell you how much with words…
one sentence that i love in particular is
“They were sincerely wealthy in their love. A love that was all the more exquisite being born of the constancy of one and the sacrifice of the other. ”
it just sums it all about their love in my opinion!
cant wait to read more!
Shame on me for not submitting this sooner. *sigh* The angst in this chapter was heartwrenching. Nessa and Amandil, Legolas and Melian, Erchirion and Nessa. Arrrggggh. However, the lovely scenes between Arwen and Aragorn and Eowyn and Faramir made up for that with their tenderness. Putting in that poem was a nice touch, btw. I’m really glad that you finally found the time to update. I’ve missed reading this story. *big hugs* Patricia
Celebriana, please, please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ch. 28 – Summer’s Fury. I was wondering where the title would fit in. Sneaky girl, hiding it to the latter parts. Wonderful update! *hugs* Patricia
The story is great so far. Please post more chapters soon. I really really really need to know what happens next. Please upadte ASAP
I updated the 29th chapter already but I believe there is a backlog in the fan fiction section right now. Hang tight! It will probably be updated soon. 🙂 I am almost done with the next chapter so hopefully it will be up this weekend. 🙂
I also updated chapter 30 on 4/3/05.
That was a great chapter…I can’t wait to see what happens next…especially after the ending to the last chapter. Keep up the good work 🙂
I just read your story for the first time and I am really impressed! Wow, I’m so jealous. You have a wonderful talent for writing! I’m especially impressed by how you’ve tied your story in with what little info Tolkien gave in LotR and with the amount of background info you’ve provided. It must have taken a lot of research and prior knowledge. I admire you for making the characters fallible. A King and Queen are supposed to be perfect but then they go off swimming after being advised not to. 🙂 It sounds like somethig I would do! Keep up the great work! I can’t wait until the next chapter is available.
-Rainë Arquen
Although few major events occur in this chapter, it is a good start to the story.However some points I feel I should mention: I believe that although the author has the right ideas, too much is said by the characters which is superfluous, e.g. these past few days have been a renewed journey of the season we spent in Lothlorien ( though we have shared little time alone since the wedding.â€) and Come, your grandfather is probably awaiting my arrival in our suite†. There is no need to give these details, as it is unrealistic that the characters would state every thought. Also, they are elves, and therefore they can feel eachother’s thoughts – elves are perceptive, they say things which are meaningful, and are often vague! I also believe that the language is too formal – you have the right idea in making it more beautiful than human speech, but it is far too stilted – there are some good bits, but on the whole it makes the section rather tedious. Do keep writing – I hope you make the following chapters more exciting, and try building up the characters and modifying your writing style!A good start. 😉 Kat
[i] “There is no need to give these details, as it is unrealistic that the characters would state every thought. Also, they are elves, and therefore they can feel eachother’s thoughts – elves are perceptive, they say things which are meaningful, and are often vague!”[/i]
[b]I do pretend to be an expert on elves but I disagree with the above conclusion. While I do believe the elves can feel each others emotions, I [u]do not[/u] believe that they can always read each others thoughts.
Had that been the case, then there are a lot of tragedies that could have been avoided in the First Age.
-Thingol should have known that Galadriel, Finrod, Orodreth, and Aegnor had taken some part in the Kingslaying. There were in his presence enough times for him to have read their guilt or as you say, their thoughts. However, it was Melian who alerted him to some disparity in the emotions of his niece and nephews. Only then did Thingol become aware of some ill that had transpired. He might have felt some vague sense of guilt emanating my them, but he did not know for sure.
-Thingol also would have known that Luthien was sneaking off to see Beren. Only unless he was never in the presence of his daughter. Since you state that elves can read each others thoughts, he should have discovered Luthien’s secret rather than being informed by a jealous admirer.
-Eol should have discovered too what Aredhel was planning when he left her alone. He was not long gone before she escaped his prison.
-Turgon should have discovered Maeglin’s treachery before he was able to act on it.
-Luthien should have been able to discover what Curufin and Curanthir planned for her.
When reading the Silmarillion, I never got the impression that elves go around “precisely” reading each others thoughts. However, I do believe they can read each others if the other elf allows it. I also believe they might have a vague sense but not an exact sense of each others thoughts.
In LOTR, the “Many Partings” chapter had where Elrond, Galadriel, Celeborn and Gandalf were mindspeaking…but I could not help noticing that it was late at night when all the world was at rest and they were reading each others thoughts by consent.
My conclusion might be wrong, but thats just the way I see it.
[i] “There is no need to give these details, as it is unrealistic that the characters would state every thought. Also, they are elves, and therefore they can feel eachother’s thoughts – elves are perceptive, they say things which are meaningful, and are often vague!”[/i]
[b]I do pretend to be an expert on elves but I disagree with the above conclusion. While I do believe the elves can feel each others emotions, I [u]do not[/u] believe that they can always read each others thoughts.
Had that been the case, then there are a lot of tragedies that could have been avoided in the First Age.
-Thingol should have known that Galadriel, Finrod, Orodreth, and Aegnor had taken some part in the Kingslaying. There were in his presence enough times for him to have read their guilt or as you say, their thoughts. However, it was Melian who alerted him to some disparity in the emotions of his niece and nephews. Only then did Thingol become aware of some ill that had transpired. He might have felt some vague sense of guilt emanating my them, but he did not know for sure.
-Thingol also would have known that Luthien was sneaking off to see Beren. Only unless he was never in the presence of his daughter. Since you state that elves can read each others thoughts, he should have discovered Luthien’s secret rather than being informed by a jealous admirer.
-Eol should have discovered too what Aredhel was planning when he left her alone. He was not long gone before she escaped his prison.
-Turgon should have discovered Maeglin’s treachery before he was able to act on it.
-Luthien should have been able to discover what Curufin and Curanthir planned for her.
When reading the Silmarillion, I never got the impression that elves go around “precisely” reading each others thoughts. However, I do believe they can read each others if the other elf allows it. I also believe they might have a vague sense but not an exact sense of each others thoughts.
In LOTR, the “Many Partings” chapter had where Elrond, Galadriel, Celeborn and Gandalf were mindspeaking…but I could not help noticing that it was late at night when all the world was at rest and they were reading each others thoughts by consent.
My conclusion might be wrong, but thats just the way I see it.[/b]
Well….I have just read the latest chapter of the story. All I can say is “Keep up the good work”. I especially loved the Legolas/Melian parts throughout the entire story. It would have been nice of they can get together though *hint*. That was just a suggestion but yeah. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
– Caladhiel_Elentari
Very well done… I enjoy this story of yours very much… I so love what you wrote about the romance between Legolas and Melian… please make them an item in your next post… thanks and good luck! Namarie..
I’ve been working my way through this for a few weeks now. It’s extremely well written and in my opinion accurate to Tolkien’s ideas, although I was a bit confused with the sudden switch in time and plot between “The Augury” and “Changes.” And, yes, you do love names that start with the letter ‘A’! *grins* Nevertheless, you are an excellent writer and I look reading future chapters of your story.
Thanks Gimli1121! I’m always worried that the LOTR enthusiasm is fading and therefore lack of interest in LOTR fan fictions.
I really love it…as always. I wish that Legolas and Melian were together though…that would make it perfect lol. It’s too bad that Amandil is gone now…I was hoping that he would come back and be with Nessa. Keep up the good work though.
you´ll have to keep on writing this story. I´m addicted to it 😉
still in some other world…! 😉
Oooookay, I just read the last 7 or 8 chapters, and I must say that this is great!!!! PLEASE write more SOON!!!!!!!!
Celebri..anna…I think I’m …dying …must…have ..more ..ch …chap …chapters …..to …r ..read …..*passes out*…
PLEASE WRITE MORE! I am dying to read the rest of this story. You should be proud of the job that you have done.
I am really enjoying this story! I do hope you continue. I managed to read it all in one shot. I must say the ongoing angst between Legolas and Melian has me quite on the edge of my seat. I DO hope that stubborn prince does not marry for the wrong reasons!!! I would have to hurt him! Please update soon!
NiRi
*sighs* oxygen! lol. I love Aragorn, and I must say I agree with him on the note that Leggy’s sitch excites little sympathy. I don’t like that Vana girl . . . grr. Legolas deserves to suffer, but Melian doesn’t. I hope things get resolved quickly. I impatiently await your next chapter!! lol! 😉
ACK! I just got the message that you updated and now I’m behind! Excellent chapter! I cannot wait to see what happens next.
NiRi
Oh dear…I’m afraid Legolas’ sense of honor can be too much at times. sigh. I wanna slap him! Not that it would do any good. Can he not see that it is DISHONORABLE to love one and pursue another and it will only bring hurt to ALL? *deep breath* Ok…this just gets more and more interesting! On the the next chapter!
NiRi
Thank you King Elessar! Well said! *loud applause & reader rushes to the next and…sadly last chapter updated*
NiRi
AGH! Ok…my stomach is in turmoil and I have too many stories doing that to me lately! I’m almost afraid to keep reading for I fear that idiot of a prince will hold to his precious honor and marry someone he doesn’t love…this is AGONY! For the reader as well as the characters…which means, of course, that you the author are brilliant!
Thanks! and please update soon! *bites nails nervously*
NiRi
I hope you update soon. The story concerning Melian and Legolas is keeping me in suspense. I do hope that he doesnt end up making a decision he regrets. He reminds me of another character…noble of heart and chose to be with another woman out of obligation rather than love. But yeah…I hope you update soon. Its a really good story. =)
Yay!!!! Oh pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon, (and put a certain separated couple back together!!!!! :D)
I love your style of writing.
Did you draw the picture that was on chapter one?
I can’t wait to read the next chapter! Please keep writing soon! 😀
*screams* ‘puppyish’?! what are you DOING?! *stews* celebrianna!!!!!!!! grr, hurry and write the next chap please . . . before I go on a tyrade . . . 😉
I got a bit impatient and read it again. PLEEEASE hurry up and write the next chapter. Oh, and make sure Erch
sorry, didn’t mean to submit that yet. make sure Erchirion keeps his distance from Nessa. or at least don’t let him complicate matters too much! ;P
lol You made me laugh when I read your most recent comment, rosie_cotton. Actually, I’m almost done with the next chapter. I’m just hammering out details.
Thanks you guys for your encouragement. 🙂
*sniff* how could you kill Amandil? *sniff*
i know that you only just updated…… but PLEASE update again soon! i just can’t wait for more! 🙂
It was still a beautiful image to behold: a sparkling white city designed in numerous circular levels. Very descriptive. It could have been in the book! I loved. I would like to read more of your work. Two thumbs up from me! 😉
I just found out about more chapters. I need to read the rest! I’m hooked onto it! How many are there?
I love, love, love this story. Please, please, please update it!!!!
Wow! I couldn’t believe it when I first started reading! You need a huge pat on the back for all of your hard work! I definatly speak for other fans of this series too when I ask “More, More!”. I will pm you w/ some suggestions:)
I am hooked on it! I have finished the whole thing (actually like a month ago) and am dying for more. Can’t wait for the next chapter:)
I sooooooo glad you update “Many Partings”. Your are an AMAZING writer. This is my favorite story (well, besides “The Wall That Fell” by Losseflame, check it out at fanfiction.net, it’s an awsome Lotr fic) anyway update again soon! I’ll be checking!
Just finished chapter 41…I admire your writing, as always…though I am dying for Legolas and Melian to ….get back together, fall in love….that is the only thing I would rewrite–maybe you have other plans for it…they would make such a great couple and I think many, many others who read it would be glad if that happened also:)
yay! amandil came back! more please! i love this story! 🙂
Guys, thank you for your encouragement. 🙂 Don’t worry, I’ll bring Legolas back in a bit. I just have to deal with a few other storylines in the mean time, including Melian, on her own.
yay! amandil’s softening up! about time ;P! totally awesome! can’t wait for more!
yay! gee, this story is getting more and more complicated! can’t wait for more!
As good as ever…I admire especially the dialogue between the characters, it is excellent. Still crossing my fingers for something good to happen between Melian and Legolas!
Awww! Thank you, guys! When I read your reviews, I immediately began writing to finish the next chapter asap. And now I’m done with it so thank you very much for your motivation.