Orcs! by Moon_Star
.:Chapter One:.
The golden Sun rose steadily in the sky over the White City of Minas Tirith, glinting upon the silver announcement trumpets as they were held in the hands of the City Heralds upon its walls. It was the beginning of a new day, and of another new beginning.
The beginning of an adventure…
“Thank you very much for putting up with us this last month Aragorn, but I am afraid we really must be going,” said Legolas, placing his light pack upon his shoulders.
“So soon?” replied Aragorn. “Well, I hope you return with good news. In the meanwhile, I am confident that my cooks shall be glad of the rest!” he laughed.
Gimli huffed indignantly. “And just what is that supposed to mean laddie?!” he queried.
“Well,” said Aragorn. “They will no longer have to make a three course meal in the morning for one…” looking at his Dwarven friend. “…and then a meal lighter than the children eat for the other!” he finished, switching his gaze to Legolas. They laughed together.
“Well, I’m glad you’ll be pleased to see the back of us,” said the Elf. “I was worried that we were going to have to come back!” He dodged a playful punch from the King of Gondor.
“You two would not be thinking of leaving without saying goodbye to your weary hostess?” whispered a soft voice from the doorway. They turned to see Arwen standing there, radiant in a long white dress that flowed around her like a breeze. She waddled over to where the trio were, and stopped beside her husband.
“My dear, you should be resting,” said Aragorn, placing a comforting arm around his spose, his voice full of a warm concern.
“Not when two of my friends are about to set off without disclosing a return date!” replied Arwen swiftly. “I wish to know so that we are not both lying awake for nights on end wondering of their safety.”
Gimli smiled. Arwen had become increasingly over-protective of all three of them since the beginning of her pregnancy; a maternal instinct that was being put to overly good use. One incident he could recall was when Legolas cut himself lightly on his knife as he whittled some new arrow heads. Barely a scratch had been his words. Arwen however had insisted she be allowed to clean it for fear of infection, and it had given himself and Aragorn much amusement as they listened to their friend’s yelps as they echoed through the door. He had then emerged scowling, a white bandage rolled from wrist to elbow, muttering under his breath. They were now unable to go anywhere without telling her.
“Now, why haven’t you told me the purpose of this little escapade of yours?” she asked. Uneasy glances were exchanged between the friends; who would tell her?
“Come along now!” she ushered, growing impatient.
“Well, we were… just going… up to the mountains in the East…” mumbled Gimli, barely coherent.
“Towards Mordor?!” cried Arwen, shocked. Her tone suddenly changed to a threatening bark. “Why?!”
“Because… because…!” stammered Gimli. “You tell her laddie!” he hissed, elbowing Legolas hard in the ribs.
“Ow!” yelped the Elf. “I mean…” he sighed, admitting defeat and opting to tell her the truth. He though over his choice of words, and then began. “There have been rumours that a small band of Orcs has been sighted in that area. We decided that we should investigate.” He winced as Arwen frowned furiously.
“So the pair of you are off to play the heroes again I expect?! Never mind the last time you decided to ‘investigate’, as you so lightly put it! What was it again, pray, do remind me!”
“It wasn’t that bad…” stated Gimli.
“Oh? So you believe that a broken arm is ‘not that bad’ do you?!”
Gimli immediately fell silent. Legolas made the grave mistake of sniggering slightly, and had to contend with the wrath of Gondor’s Queen.
Rounding on the younger Elf, her eyes were blazing with fury. “Just what are you giggling at?!” she demanded. “As far as I can recall, you were not much better off!”
Legolas shuffled his feet slightly. “Well Arwen, I…” He sighed and shrugged his shoulders.
It was at this point that Aragorn decided to step in and save the situation. “My dear,” he whispered softly, embracing his wife and turning her around. “Are you sure you would not wish to rest?” He stared deeply into her eyes for a moment, and then allowed her to rest her head on his shoulder. With Arwen distracted for a moment, he looked over to his two friends and mouthed the words “Go on!”
Gimli tiptoed quietly out of the stable door into the fresh sunlight. Legolas followed close behind, creeping silently beside Arod.
“Dina mellonamin,” he whispered, smiling slightly. “Ten’ lye rima i’peniel en nebriniel he pundil!” [Silence my friend,… For we run the risk of incurring her wrath!]
Arwen stared lovingly into Aragorn’s eyes, lost in the deep inescapable whirlpools of devotion. However, she was rudely interrupted by the sound of thundering hooves. She whirled round as hastily as she could in her current state and was met with the sight of both Elf and Dwarf making a sly get-away on the back of their horse. She called after them;
“Just do not look for trouble like you usually do!”
She received a sarcastic twin chime of “We won’t!” back over the wind as they slowly shrank smaller and smaller into the distance, towards the rising Sun. The she-Elf then took it upon herself to round upon the husband who she, just short seconds ago, was besotted by.
“I take it that you all were practising that all morning, am I correct?” she queried. Aragorn smiled gently.
“Do not fret. Our wayward friends know better than to cross you melath nin,” he whispered, before planting a kiss on her rosebud lips. “I am sure they will be fine.”
~*~*~*~
“I do not care what you say Master Elf, for even though we have ridden on this accursed beast for near to three years now, I still dislike being jostled around like a sack of Shire potatoes!” grumbled Gimli gruffly.
“Gimli, please!” cried Legolas jokingly. “You have insulted this poor steed long enough!” As if in agreement with his master, Arod snorted and shook his head approvingly. “You see!” laughed the Elf. He ignored the moody moan of his companion.
“Besides,” he added with a grin, “as for the entire vision of the potato sack? Well mellonamin, it is an easy mistake to make!”
The white stallion ran with the wind as they made their way across the plains. Above them the mountains that marked the border between Gondor and the Black Land loomed, dark storm clouds whirling high above them, painting a picture of a deep dark nightmare.
“Remind me again why we just walk into these situations?” asked Gimli in jest.
“Because we happen to be the two most insane beings in Middle-Earth mellonamin. After all, if we did not, who would?” replied Legolas.
~*~*~*~
“I think it is high time that we stopped for a rest Legolas,” said Gimli. “After all, this is roughly the area in which those dirty, disgusting, filthy things have been spotted.”
The Elf whispered something softly into Arod’s ear that Gimli could not pick up, and they stopped gently. The Dwarf then took this moment of sweet reprise to survey his surroundings.
The ground was black and parched, showing years of ill use and drought. The few trees that dotted the dark hills were knarled and twisted, void of all beauty that marked the trees of Lothlorien or Ithilien. The clouds that they had glimpsed from far off were now swirling directly above them, with the occasional rumble of thunder.
“What a warm, hospitable place,” sighed Legolas. “We can camp under those trees over there. We’ll continue again tomorrow, yes?”
Gimli agreed with both the statement about their new surroundings and their plans, and so they set about building a small fire with which to keep warm in this otherwise cold, cruel land.
They did not notice the sunken, sickly eyes gazing out at them from the shadows…
~*~*~*~
84 Comments
That was great! Please update it soon.
Your story is intrigueing and well written. To what terrible atrocity will you send the dashing young Elvish Princling to save this time, eh? Hope to keep reading!!
pleeeeaaassssee, pleeeaaasssee!!!!! write more!!
chap. 2 didn’t show up yet. It’s driving me crazy!!!!
I must proclaim that this story is excellent! The chapters that are to come fill me with anticipation.
OMGosh! write more! that was soooo good!!!!
No, I’m not being weird and reviewing my own story! ๐ I wanted to say thanks to everyone here for reading my story!!! ๐
O PLEASE HURRY! I WANNA FINISH READING IT!!! IT’S SOO GOOD!
write more please!!!!!! please!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!
pleez, pleez update soon!I need to know what happens!!! It is soooo good!!!! ๐
I can’t wait for the next chapter!!! This is sooo great!!!! ๐
OMG! That was so good, this is one of the best fanfics I’ve come across in a very long time. Please post more soon, I look forward to reading more of your work.
LothlomeElenfana;)
I love your story. I think its really awsome and well planned. but please…dont kill legolas…(begging, lol) good job
Amanda
That was good!
Please!!add more soon!I think it’s the best of all I’ve read =)
WHAT?! You can’t just leave it hanging like that! Tell us more!
i really like it. very very very brilliant
Another wonderful chapter! Please post more soon the suspense is killing me!
Great story! The suspense is killing me!!!! Please write more!!!!!!
The suspense is killing me! You must post more SOON!
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!
love it!! please update soon!!!
I still love your story!!! This is probably my favorite fan fiction of all! write more soon!!!! This is sooo exciting!
YAY Legolas isn’t dead! On the other hand things look pretty bad for them. Another great chapter, post more SOON, I’m dying over here.
This is really good. i like it.
wow. That was really amazing. thank you for not killing legolas i don’t think i could have taken that. write more!
Please update your story soon! I love it sooo much!!!! I can’t stand waiting anymore!
oh my god Legolas is going to die *crys uncontrolably* on a brighter note i love your fanfic please add more you can’t just leave them all dieing.
oh.. im glad there both ok you had me worried there for a second but i need to know what will happen
I loved that chapter! This is so exciting!!! Your writing is soooo great!!! More soon please!!!!
Oh my goodness! This is great!!! I just read all your stories in a row, and I have to tell you I am in suspense. You have a wonderful gift, and I’m glad you’re using it! I can’t wait til chapter 8!! Have fun!
รยฟรยกรยฟYou killed Arwen?!? No!!!! Please!!! More chapters soon, before I go insane waiting!!!!
Oh, good heavens! Leave me hanging! That’s not a very nice thing to do! I’m so nervous now I just realized I need to go change my pants….
Anyhow, very good! I love this story! You use a lot of detail, which I like, and You write it like a TV series, like 24 or some suspense show. Very well done!
Please, please, please let Arwen be ok and write another chapter soon. Please!
Well, I’ve only read the first chapter so far, and I’d like to point out one thing you could fix: I very seriously doubt the clouds would still be over Mordor by this time.
I am so nervous! You write really well, and have always kept me on the edge of my seat. It’s hard not to scroll down and see what happens to Aragorn or Legolas or Arwen or Gimli. I really love your stories. Thanks for sharing your gift with us! =)
Write more! And soon I’m dying of suspense! Wonderful as usual I might add.
I loved your story very much. Write some more soon!
I’ve made it to chapter nine, and I like it so far. Keep up the good work.
However, I’d like to point out that you refer to Aragorn as a “young” king, indicating that you don’t know much about him. The Dunedain are very long-lived, and Aragorn was already nearly ninety by the time of the War of the Ring.
No, I’m not reviewing myself… I’d just like to respond and say thank you all for reviewing so far, and just a small point to SarumanofManyColors; yes I know I refer to Aragorn as a “young king”.
I was asked about that on a different site where I posted this. Basically, I do that because in most sources I’ve found, it states that Aragorn lives to be into his 200’s. Due to the fact that he’s only 90 in this story (*only*, lol!) I referred to him as being ‘young’ as, compared to how old he becomes, he’s got a good many years ahead of him! I’m very sorry if I hadn’t explained that well enough; I’ll try harder next time! Thanks for pointing it out though!
If anyone else has questions please don’t hesitate to ask! ^_^
OH!!!! I can’t wait for the next one!!!!!!!!
Amazing chapter!!! I can’t wait for more!!! This is sooooo good!!!!
Yes! Another brilliant chapter. I cannot wait for the next one. I’m in agnony from all the suspense. Post more soon!
Man, this story rocks. it just gets better and better. great job! write more!!!!!
Talk about a cliffhanger! I can’t wait until the next one!
You’re leaving me in complete suspense! Another excellent chapter by the way. Write more soon!
Ack! What happens to Legolas and Gimli and Aragorn and Arwen and Faramir and..and…*passes out from lack of air* I have to know what happens!!
that was really, really good! write more please!
GREAT STORY! What’s going to happen to Arwen’s baby? Awesome forshadowing with the “mysterious pain” in Legolas’ stomach. I think I know where this is going, but PLEASE keep writing!
O come on! The suspense is crazy!! I don’t know how much more of this I can take before it kills me!! Seriously, though, great job! This is one of my favorite stories on the Fanfiction.
WOW this is getting REALLY exciting!!! Please put the next chapter up soon!!!!!
I just read all the chapters and i love it! keep up the good work.
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!Why does the chapter have to be over??? I am dying of suspense, I don’t think I can take it anymore. I HAVE to know what happens!Anyway, another amazing chapter! You should have seen me jump out of my seat when I saw you had put another chapter up. Write more and SOON!
DON’T LEAVE ME WITH THIS HORRIBLE CLIFF-HANGER!!!! PLEASE!!! please write more!!! This is sooooo good!!!!!!
What, no more chapters? And I thought you might do a sequel when you’re done.
AAAHHHHH!!!!!!!! ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER!!! HURRY AND WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! lol
I love this story! I can’t wait for the rest of it, will Legolas be all right? I’m so excited!
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! You’re driving me crazy with suspense. If I don’t find out what happens I’m going to die! Loved it as usual.
this is my first time reading it and i loved it! however you left us with a CLIFFHANGER!!!! you must UPDATE SOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is soooooo good!!!! PLEASE!! PLEASE!!!!! POST THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON!!!!!!!!
this is so great i cant wait till you finish the next chapter
Okay I totally loved as usual. You’re killing me with the cliff hangers though, I could kill you for that. One thing, that part where Cayred has Aragorn dangling over the cliff, that part kind of reminds me of The Lion King for some reason. Any connection?Awesome though, very awesome. Write more and soon!
No offense or anything, but I think as Cayred held Aragorn over the ledge you copied The Lion King a little bit. But it’s a great story, keep it up!
I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!!!! AND THERE ARE TOO MANY TO COUNT IN THIS!!! Great job!
Hi again everyone! ^_^ Just a few responses to some reviews; about it seeming a little like the Lion King in that chapter… (lol!) Sorry it seemed samey. Believe it or not, this whole entire fanfic was inspired by that movie, so that’s probably how that got in there. ^_~ I hope you enjoyed it though! I’ll make sure to update soon though; keep checking back for more! ^_^
you are great at this you know exactly how to make the reader come back wanting more please hurry with the next chapter
THIS IS SOOOOO SUSPENSEFUL!!!!!!! Please write the next chapter soon, please, please, please, please… (the pleases go on and on, I’ve just got tired of typing them…)
please hurry with the next chapter i cheack everyday this i so great tho this i s kind of like loin king but stil really good
You are SUCH a talented writer! Your words are SO descriptive! I Love this story I hope the final chapters come out soon!! Oh yeah and you know the part where Cayred Said long live the king ? That sounds like the part on The Lion King! Oh Well! I wish you the best of luck with your stories and hope you get more chapters done soon!
~elflover14~
WhathappenswhathappenswhathappensWHATHAPPENS??!?!?!?!? *hyperventilates and falls over*
BTW – wonderful build-up of suspense and all. ๐
Soooooo exciting!!! Please post the next chapter soon!!!!!
OH MY GOSH! Is legolas gonna die?? I NEED to know!!!!!! I’m at the point of crying right now…! It’s soooo sad! Your stories are so good! Please say the next chapters soon or I’m gonna go crazy with questions!
~elflover14~
NOOOOOOOOOO! Legolas can’t die!
*applauds loudly* Awesome end to the story!!! Aragorn and Eldarion are too sweet together, and you’ve gotten all the character relationships perfectly! *clapping* Keep up the fantastic work!!!
WOW! Your story is awesome! I loved it!
WOW!!! That’s all I can say! That was an awesome story! It was really, really good!!! I look forward to reading more of your writing!
That was so awesome!!!!!!!!! i was hooked the whole time please consider writing a sequel!!!!:)
TWO THUMBS UP!!!!! I almost cried when Legolas had gotten shot! That has to be the best story yet that I’ve read on this site!!!! It was soooo awesome! I love action stories!!!! Do you have any other stories out yet? If so PM me and tell me! Keep up th FANTASTIC work!!!!! ๐
~elflover14~
wow. genius
I love it! ^_^ I just got in trouble for staying up late to finish reading it…. so yeah, its great! goooooood story. really great writing.
OMG! I finished it, I loved it. It’s one of the best fanfics I’ve ever read. You really scared me with the Legolas about to die thing. Awesome job!
i read this in like half an hour i was so in to it!!!!!!!!!! Awesome- another story~!!!!!!
I’m sure a review two years late wasn’t what you had in mind, but I just wanted to say that your story was very well written!
Elandor.
cool. very cool. aragorn’s lady in bree really liked it, too, i see…if i had seen lion king before reading this, it probably would have ruined it for me…but i’ve never seen that movie…for some reason…and i agree with elrilyendenaire(hope i spelt that right); you do write like 24. i love that show. and your fic, so it works out well. i’m really tired right now…can you tell? anyway, great story and loved how aragorn acted with eldarion. that was soooooo sweet! anyway, i’m gonna go to bed now so you can stop reading my ramblings…i always ramble when i’m tired…ok…g’night