Peace at Last? by galadrielady945
Disclaimer: I own nothing from The Lord of the Rings.
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Crystal Gamgee lay in her cell. She was sick, just like many of the other Hobbits in the Lockholes. All of the Hobbits were thin, for the food that was given to them was not nourishing and not enough. Many of the Hobbits had died already from sickness or hunger.
Someone propped her up. “Sit up, deary.” said a gentle voice. “Good thing that we have this water, eh?” Crystal smiled weakly. It was Lobelia. Gentle was she ever since she had been thrown into the Lockholes and put in Crystal’s cell. Crystal was glad Lobelia was here. She would have hated to have been alone in this dark cell while she was ill.
There was a sudden noise followed by a burst of light. Crystal heard a familar voice speak to Lobelia and she answered as she placed Crystal back on the pallet. “Frodo Baggins!! Well, it’s about time someone saved us from this cell. I am glad to see you…” Her voice trailed off at the sound of a jingling of keys and a cell door opening.
“Come, Lobelia, let’s get you out of here,” Frodo said as he took her arm.
“B-but I can’t leave Crystal. She sick,” came Lobelia’s protest.
“CRYSTAL?!?!?” Crystal smiled to herself as she heard Sam’s voice. ‘Sam’ she thought.
Crystal felt someone put their hand on her face.
“She’s burning…” said Sam.
“Let’s get her out of here. Hurry!” Frodo bent down and scooped Crystal off the pallet, but still shocked by her beauty. He gave orders to have all of the other Hobbits released, the sick and wounded cared for and the dead buried in a beautiful part of the Shire.
Frodo handed Crystal over to Sam. “We best get your cousin tended Sam,” he said.
A little while later, Crystal felt herself put into a bed that was soft and warm.
“Will she be alright, Mr. Frodo?” Sam asked, fear in his voice.
“Just wait, all of the other Hobbits that were in the Lockholes will get the best care of the Shire….”
Frodo’s voice trailed off as Crystal fell asleep.
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Next chapter coming soon!!!! Please review for me…
17 Comments
That was a great story. I can’t wait for you to write more. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter!
very good story!! i really like it!! I can’t wait till the next chapter is up!!!! great job!!!!
Awesome!!! can’t wait til the next chapter!!
This was a really good story, and I enjoyed it. I have only one critisisim, a constructive one. I think you should stay away form more modern sayings, and wordings. But over all, it was a great story. Keep on writing, I love to read Frodo in a romance other than slash(I hate slash-Yuck!)
WONDERFUL!!!! HOW DOES IT FOLLOW?
Brilliant and kinda cute. I don’t usually go for romance, but this is brill. I can’t wait to find out how the others react!
This is a very nice story. Finally somebody made a nice romantic story with Frodo in it. Good job!
Darnit!!! I always thought Frodo had homosexual tendencies… Oh well. Really good GaladrielLady! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
CAN U PLEASE WRITE SUM MORE U HAVEN’T PUT ANYMORE FOR AGES!!! BRILLIANT, I HASTEN TO ADD, BUT U R TAKING FOREVER!!!
is there more???
please say yes if so write it!!!
VERY SWEET!!!! BUT, HAVE THEY HAD SEX? UMM, INTERESTING!! 🙂 PLEASE, FOLLOW THE STORY, I WOULD KNOW THE OPINION OF GANDALF,
This is so cool! Please add more on here, this is going really well.
HURRY UP AND ADD ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please
I know that this story has been up for a while, but since I’m still getting used to the site I just now read it. I loved and i can’t wait to find ot what happens.
Aurora
Hi
Just a few tips for writing- after you’ve finished just go through and check that everything makes sense, check your spelling and grammar e.t.c. It just makes it a bit distracting for the reader when these things come up.
Also try to make your chapters a bit longer and have a bit more depth but otherwise keep writing and I’m looking forward to the rest of your work.
continue witht the story ….PLEASE!!!
hi!!!
don´t worry, we’ll wait for you,
luck in your exams,
xxxx
Luzmela,