The Counterpart : Prologue by Evelynn
I DO NOT own anything concerning Tolkien’s work nor am I trying to copy his style. I wrote what I felt was good to write.
Prologue:
The Undying Lands… such a beautiful place. With its crystal clear lakes and streams, vast mountain ranges, deep lush valleys, wide spacious prairies and plains, and thick fertile forests. It’s nothing but splendid, isn’t it?
However, everything must have a balance… a counterpart so to say. Even the Undying Lands must have a counterpart and that opposite…
Well, you have to see for yourself.
Nevertheless, my journey begins elsewhere when I was every young… My journey begins in Middle-Earth.
3 Comments
I’m very curious as to what’s going to happen next! Please write more! I also really like your writing style.
It’s kind of similar to mine! 🙂
I really do like this story! 🙂 My only suggestion is that you maybe don’t change the view points so much. It does get a little cinfusing. 😉
Will do. It will probaby happen once in awhile now, for some reason I felt I should capture different points of views the first time they meet. Glad you like it 🙂