The Crowning of the King by evil_rings_lady
Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters, they’re all Tolkien’s. All I do is write stories about them and drool over pictures on the Internet.
The Crowning of the King
I stood through the ceremony, half-hidden by my standard. Ada stood next to me. I had made my choice, and both of us knew it.
The winged crown of Gondor was placed on Aragorn’s head, and still all was quiet. Then Aragorn began to sing.
I listened, not as surprised as the Gondorians. I had known Aragorn long enough to know that he could sing, although he usually sang only of Elvish myths.
The last note died, and Aragorn stepped of the dais. He greeted Legolas, who had waiting at the edge of the dais. Then he turned his eyes solemnly to his people. His gaze froze, and I knew he had seen me.
We did not run into each others arms, as I had often imagined we would. Instead, Aragorn walked slowly toward me, picking up his pace a little at a time until he was right in front of my father and I.
Ada stepped aside, and glancing at him I was startled to see tears in his eyes. I had never known Ada to be very emotional. Then again, I was his only daughter.
I passed the standard to my Lady-in-waiting. We were right in front of each other now.
It suddenly occurred to me that Aragorn might have changed. War could do that to a person. Here was Aragorn, right in front of me, wearing a crown. I had anticipated this moment for a long time, but I no longer knew what to do.
Maybe he wanted me to put on a regal, queenly expression like my grandmother, Galadriel. Or perhaps he expected me to throw myself on the ground and declare myself his servant.
I compromised by lowering my eyes respectfully. Humble, but tipping my head a little so no one could see my expression.
But Aragorn grabbed my chin, raising it so he could look at my face.
For a second we stared into each others eyes, and I knew in that moment he had not changed. Nothing had changed. He was Aragorn, I was Arwen, and we would love each other no matter what.
We kissed then, and I forgot everything.
I forgot the whole population of Gondor was watching.
I forgot my doubts.
I forgot my father’s dislike for my decision.
I could only think of the man in front of me, the man I loved: Aragorn.
We finally pulled apart, and I was suddenly aware of the cheers and applause: Gondor was greeting their new king and queen.
A/N
What do you think? If it sucks, tell me! It’s my first story, so it probably does. R/R anyways, though! π
65 Comments
Two words:Loved this!!!!!! ReaLly the story is great!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!(bows down to the ground)How can you just stop at a time like that!It was getting really really really good.You are a very talented writer so I hope you write more….soon.
Tiniwiel13
PS:PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON make that VERY SOON.(runs away sobbing uncontrollably)
I’d take my hat off to this great peice of writing. You are very talented so please write more! π
Very good! I’ve often thought what Arwen’s reaction would be if she ever found out… Though, I never thought Aragorn was actually in love with her. Eowyn just assumed too much, but that’s only my opinion… Great story, though!
Great story! Very very good!! Please write more soon!
Heh I read the story and I would have reviewed it but i was very tired the night i read it, anyway very good story nice use of descriptions and word useage and a good story also, now stop reading this review and keep writing!
wow! awesome story! i seriously wish i could write like that! you describe arwen’s feelings so well its like i can see right inside her mind or like i’m walking around in her shoes. excellent work! please please please please post chappie 5 soon! please please!!!
I really loved your story!!! I know from experience how Arwen must have felt, and you described it perfectly. Can’t wait till you write more!
I just thought I would tell you that the last 3 chapters were GREAT!!!I ope you continue writing.I love your story(incase you haven’t already noticed)
Tiniwiel13
PS:sorry it took me so long to review but I was in Florida and when I got back the computer was not working and it’s still not working I’m using my grandfathers right now.
Very good… I don’t like Arwen a whole lot… who am I kidding? I HATE Arwen, but I feel that you capture what she should have been like very well, not to mention that Aragorn is very well portrayed. Keep up the good work!
Like every other chapter you’ve wrote I love the last one.I’m glad you explained the whole starbucks thing cause I was a little confused.After I understood it I thought it was funny.Well enough raddling I’ll just get to the point-keep up the great work.Oh and I don’t care if you spelled my name wrong we all mess up typing at least once in our lives.
Tiniwiel13
By the Valar, someone should just grab the Horselord and tell him to keep an eye on his sister …
Wow…. Those are hard pastries… i remember this one time i hit a piece of old cold chicken on a metal table and a piece of it chipped off…. anyway good story keep writing and i will keep reviewing…. or will i?
That’s hillarious about the baggles! teehee!! My cousin (Tiniwiel13 who sent you a review before) Suggested me read this since we get on and read fanfics almost every day( pitifull life huh?!) I think it’s GREAT! I never thought of using the perspective of arwen before Very clever! anyways keep up the fantastic work!!! Best of Luck!
Oh my goodness are you trying to kill me. I am going to die if you don’t review soon. So please please please review soon.
Tiniwiel13
ps:write more soon….please(smiles like an angel).
Hehe!!! The end of Ch7 when they get in the fight sounds like something my family would do!!! (you can just ask Tiniwiel!) anywho……That was a really good chapter! I liked the end the best though! Keep up the fantastic work!
Oh my.That chapter was hilarious.I don’t care how “fluffy” it was.Well keep up the great work.
Tiniwiel13
I have to stop reading these stories. I mean what is it with people and torturing me.People must just love torturing me.That is it I am going to stop reading in December.I don’t want so maybe I won’t but I think I am going to go insane.If you write more soon I probably won’t though.
Tiniwiel13
hey, i really like your story, especially the last part (soooooooooooooooooo funny!!!) (ok mabye not that funny but still funny). you are going to continue, aren’t you??? (i really really really love it!!!)
And what, might I ask, is wrong with fluff?
And where did you get that “Idiot’s Guide to De-fluffing your Story?”
I love your style – it’s lightweight, but strong enough to carry the plot smoothly.
Perhaps Arwen starts to carry Eldarion? The first trimester of pregnancy is ALWAYS lots of fun for those around the expectant mother…
I look forward to more!
Fluffy?!? Whatever! I think it’s great!! Can You pm when the next chapter is out??? Luv it!
That was a nice-good-great-EXCELLENT chapter!!!
Full of suspense and most of the time I love suspense.Although I did not like the way it ended.I hate endings that make me have to wait- I mean don’t get me wrong I am a patient person but I love your story so when it comes to that I’m very….im-patient.Well please,please,pleaseeee write more soon.
Tiniwiel13
P.S.: my cousin (elflover14) is alot like me so I would expect her to review.
Awww that chapter was rlly sad π It was rlly good to though! lots of suspense! I’m the girl that was with legolas!!!!! teehee!!! J/K! Well I hope you post more and…oh…..Have A Happy Thanksgiving!!
YOU ARE NOT NICE!!!!!!!! Just ending a chapter at that point. Better post more before the wait drives me insane (wait, I’m already insane)
nice story…love the part where u make leggy with “the fluttering of eyelashes and clasping of hands”! lol…its so cute. But how can u make leggy be seeing a girl? noooo 0.o plz make that be only a rumor!
one thing tho…ur title and summary say its of arwen after she discovers the eowyn thing….but now you’re kinda gone from it. Not that its bad, but maybe u should change the title if ur gonna make it be more like just what happens after the wedding? lol, don’t mind me. forget it….im crazy.
keep writing! its not bad!
A romantic, yet funny fanfic = Perfection. Why are you authors attempting to kill me?!??!?! SUSPENSE…TOO…GREAT!!! I love this story, PLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEE!!! update soon! Maybe you could pm me when you do? Btw, your Youth group sounds a lot like mine! Only, ours does a bit more damage…the church just patched up the 4th hole in the wall…well, I g2g, I’ll be back! MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!! (sorry, I’m a bit hyper today!:D)
write more write more write more please please please.you have to need to no have to.please please please.
Tiniwiel13
YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE…please that chapter was great i mean fantasatic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tiniwiel13
Keep posting!! Post more soon!! Glad you overruled your 6th sense and didn’t leave a HUGE cliffie. please PM when you post more.
I love this! I just got bored and was looking around COE and I found your story, and it’s awesome! Hurry with the 10th chapter!
it’s kinda short, but i think it’s quite interesting. love the first person view~
Howdy! Sorry it took me so long to review:(…..My brother made me get off one night when I was reading! This ch. was AWESOME!!! I love how you made Gamling wake up! Don’t worry bout it being a sad story;) I like sad stories anyway! Heck I like any story! Yeah! I’m the girl that was with legolas!!! By the way thanks for PMing me! Great ch! write more soon! See Ya!
o.mi.gosh. u totally rock my world. how’d u get soo funny? and i totally agree: english teachers much live in a different universe.
oh, and word of advice on the sugar thing: stay away from sprite remix. it’s very dangerous!!!!
oh my gosh!!!!!! you reviewed really,really soon.i’m amazed.it was a GREAT chapter.WELLLLL,write more soon please.
Tiniwiel13
Awwwww! That’s so sweet! Arwen has a friend now!!!! Yea! go her! That’s sad that Aragorn’s going to war…..again. It really builds up suspense! I LOVED it! Write more!!! MOUNTAIN DEW!!!! lol!
This should be a ‘humor’ story instead. Keep up the good work!
Ok.You are sure you like Arwen right? Cause you sure do make her do a lot of suffering. A cliff hanger that big is what will cause me to stop reading. YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!please.
~Tiniwiel13~~
I love your story, but I wish you wouldn’t write the dialogue as modern sounding as you did. They didn’t really talk like that, and it feels kinda weird to read it like that. Again, I LOVE it.
This is very interesting. You have given a very earthy aspect to Arwen, so the reader can relate to her in an affectionate and understanding way. Well done, (sorry to say this but) please keep the chapters coming! π
Please post next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! It’s our birthday and we wants it!
Great story, but please don’t have Aragorn die or I’ll get depressed and have to eat lots of chocolate to cheer me up, and then I’ll get fat!
I really enjoyed this story, but I don’t think Faramir and Aragorn would have fought because of Eowyn’s previous infatuation with Aragorn, as I think they got along quite well. however, you could develop further with this and show the development of Faramir and Aragorn’s friendship. It would also be interesting to see if Arwen behaves differently towards Eowyn now that she knows this. However, don’t make it into a catfight as it is below both Arwen and Eowyn.
Sorry this review is so long, but you did ask for suggestions! Be careful what you wish for π
Yea, Arwen has a friend. Booo Aragorn has to go to battle again. Keep writing I love it.
BOOOOHOOOO!!! you havent wrote anymore yet.I think i am going to die.Please write more.for my sake.
I knew you enjoted torturing me!!!YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awwww! What a nice random lady… now I hope things will get better and better from there. Hmm?
this was a lovely short! you put arwen so much into it…i loved it. as an ameuter fanfic writer myself, i know how it feels to post something for the first time. fortunately for you, yours is awesome! (mine sucked.) keep up the marvelous writing!!
This is good, even if it is really short. Please write more!
Please continue!!!!!!!!!! I want to know how it ends. Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaassssssssse!
Sorry I haven’t reviewed on every chapter!
I should have! This is awsome! I think it’s the best fanfic I’ve ever read! I look forward to the upcoming chapters!
I know, I am pushy, but am satisified with where you left off. Keep posting, I’m just a reviewer and cannot offer good advice to fanfic writers, but I try to anyways. I love this story!
aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I’m so sad!!! ONLY ten chapters!!! I can’t WAIT til you add more!! π This is really great stuff; I love it! Your writing is quite good as well. I mostly do poetry…Lotr and non Lotr…but you’ve inspired me to work some more on this one fan fic I started! π Oooohhh my goodness, I love this story!!! π When Faramir & Aragorn were talking, my heart was beating hard and I felt Arwen’s pain when she saw Aragorn leave in chapter 10…*sobs*…as I’ve said before, good writing! I like your style; keep it up!! And AGAIn…PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE WRITE MORE SOOONNN!! π
π No hurry of course though.. π lol.
talk to ya later~
<3 Arwen <3
p.s. My favorite characters are also Aragorn & Arwen, sam as my 3rd π
Great new chapter! Please update soon. Awesome work!
YOU ROCK!!! I’m in love with Legolas!!(not that I wasn’t before!) I’m…Daisy….am I an elf??!! It’s so funny cause I’m so outgoing and love to fight and get into arguments!!…especially with my cousin!! But I think it’s quite funny!! I like the part where Legolas and I are holding hands and staring at each other….*falls out of chair and faints*
Very nice!! π I like how Legolas & Daisy’s relationship is progressing slowly but surely π
Oohh I feel so bad for Arwen…being away from Aragorn and not knowing if he’s safe or not. π I can’t wait til you put up chapter 12!! Do it soon please, if you can! π
*Namarie* <3 Arwen <3
Noooo!!Why isn’t Aragorn back? He has to come back!!Overall it was an extremely good chapter.Keep up the goog work!!
really cool. This is my favourite fic on the whole site, so please write more!! And whatever you do, PLEASE DON’T KILL ARAGORN!!!!!
Hey, for a first story, this is really good. Please write another!
very, very good. I write a lot of fan-fics too, but none of mine can float from discription too discription like your story does *sniff* good job, giv us updates, lots and lots of updates
That is funny! well, seening how it is so good and captivating, i have to leave to get back to the story! thank you!!! -eowyns kid,
P.S.(my sunday school class some times gets stale bagels and stuff, but we can’t throw our food cause we have to cleen up all our messes, though once we did get the whip cream cans and spray them at each other!!! LOL!!! THANKS AGAIN!)
like that last little bit of slapping part!!! very good, sounds famirlar, ‘cept i am legolas, and…
Can you review ASAP?! i love it! thanks
I loved it!!! Aragorn and Arwen are my FAV LotR charaters. If you see my avatar you will see what I mean! Please write more!
MinasElendil
This story is great! Keep the chapters coming and just as good!
Very good! Keep going!
This is SO good!!Please PM me when you are going to do another chapter!
Thanks.