The one ring by Mirnim
The one ring
Your so close,
Yet so far.
I cannot see you,
But I know where you are….
I will find you, I will get you
Get you from that Hobbit
And the other one never even knew.
The one ring
Your so close,
Yet so far.
I cannot see you,
But I know where you are….
I will find you, I will get you
Get you from that Hobbit
And the other one never even knew.
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1 Comment
I think you’ve got a really good start there… my advice would be to elaborate it a bit, make it longer, add some more emotion. It could turn into a really awesome piece!