Through Walls of Iron by Ringbearer4now
Through Walls of Iron
A breaking soul at every stroke
Confronts the darkness with its eye
And ebbs away -with every hope-
At every pain, at every cry.
“Lost in darkness, I lie in shame
No light to reflect my silent tears
And no veil to hide the burning flame,
Kindled brightly with my fears.
“Through walls of iron, I hear a song
As if to wake me from my sleep
Or to lull me back to my bed
From where I cower, and dare to weep.
“The song speaks of places fair,
Of beauty and the coming day,
Of elves with jewels in their hair
Walking along the peaceful bays.
“But then I hear the bitter note,
The line of darkness ‘buried deep’
And I am here, all alone,
Already woken from my sleep.
“The last four lines I do not heed:
Happiness came and left again;
In a hope, and in a dream
The song had come to its end.
“And then I heard the voice once more
Singing of towers ‘strong and high’,
I tried to answer before it left
Me in darkness to forever lie.
“But the voice- it stopped when footsteps came
‘Thus left my last song of peace’
When then I felt the shock of pain
That woke me, surely, out of sleep.
“And this is the ending of the song
That I should lie in darkness deep?
Bear the scars of every pain
And feel the sorrow of every grief?
“I cowered beneath a violent stroke
In the darkness of my cell,
I recalled the lines of my home-
When came a defiant and incensed yell-
“I heard the thud of a heavy form
Then- the choking sobs of a friend
O could this be who sang the song?
Could this be a happy end?”
6 Comments
Ooh. I like it. I love the inserted quotes from Sam’s song, and how they were woven into Frodo’s response. The poem’s tone — that of Frodo’s thoughts — changes along with the song’s progression. Very skillfully done!
Wow, that’s beautiful! I love the last line best… It captures that moment perfectly. Cirith Ungol is one of my favorite parts in the book, and this poem sums the mood leading up to Sam finding Frodo wonderfully!
Keep up the good work! SonofDrogo
A beautiful poem that truly captures the spirit of Frodo. Well done!
That was (if you can call a poem perfect) PERFECT! That brought me right back into that chapter of the book.
This is very good.
This is so great!!! I love it!!