Ungwale Quenta by nienna_elenstar
Ungwale Quenta
By Nienna Elenstar
Chapter 1
Disclaimer: This does not belong to me… no matter how I want it to be mine…
” Legolas!!!” Aragorn cried out.
They were fighting a band of orcs and Legolas had just been slashed on his right thigh. He had already suffered a shot left arm and a wide gash and his right side – all to the credit of the orcs.
Aragorn, on the other hand, was not at all injured. The concern of his friend’s well being turned into adrenaline as he madly hacked off about 15 heads off the orcs.
Hacking off the head of the last orc, he surveyed the masterpiece he created on the once lush and green clearing to a now really bloody one.
Satisfied that he had killed all the orcs, he quickly rushed to the tree where Legolas was now leaning on, panting as he felt the adrenaline wear off and tiredness setting in.
“How do you fare, mellon nin?” he asked, concerned, forgetting his tiredness.
” I’m pretty sure that your eye vision did not worsen as rapidly as the orcs lost their heads in your hands, can’t you see for yourself? But don’t worry, they are only superficial,” Legolas joked.
Aragorn couldn’t help smiling at that remark. *Trust Legolas to lighten up the mood and say that his wounds are only superficial when the blood is bleeding so freely. *
It was only then did he notice Legolas’ rapid and shallow breathing. ” Now Legolas, tell me how you feel, truthfully,” emphasizing the last word. Legolas opened his mouth to answer, but instead….
A/N: I’m so sorry for this horrible cliff hangers, but for far too long I have been tortured by cliff hangers, and now this is revenge…*smiles evilly* This is my first fanfic, so please go easy on me but review !!! Tell me if it sucks or not. So click that button now!!! The number of reviews shall determine if I should update or not…J
30 Comments
I love your story! Tell me how many reviews you want & I’ll give them to you!!!!
ohhh this is good! i MUST know how it ends!
Sooo gooooood, bad cliff hangers! I want more story, please write more story.
It sounds really interesting. I like stories of Legolas and this one sounds very good. Please put more chapters.
Please update.If you do not I might go CRAZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am reviewing again! I love the story. Fav part: When Aragorn mentally slaps himself. It made me giggle.
Now it sounds REALLY good. I had a feeling that Legolas would black out. Oh, please write the next chapter soon. I want to find out what happens next!
that wasn’t bad
I still looove your story soooo much!!!
Please Continue writing the story. DEFINATELY NO sec change!!!!!!!!!!! Too gross. I’m reading with a couple of friends too and that’s their comments. I agree. So that’s 4 people basicly saying the same thing. Next chapter. Maybe longer?
Good story, please write chp. 4 soon. I agree with elven maiden and her friends a sex change poison would NOT be good, maybe just death or serious bodily harm, like loss of sight for example. Otherwise, you’re doing a great job!
no sex changes! That would be kind of wierd (It might be funny) but still wierd! I still looove your story soooo much!!! 🙂
My friends came over to see if you had written the next chapter. They didn’t like the chapter. Neither did I. That is totally not like Aragorn! He would probably be dumbfounded, yes, but not laughing! Especially at his best friend. Please, next chapter, write it. It’s a good story, but sex change? Wasn’t what I had in mind.
The chapter was great!
The story has a good premise, but your syntax could use some work. Sex change? Lose it. That is why I stopped watching soap operas. In a dream maybe, but that has been done.
Wonderful, jsut wonderful, I’m crying from laughing! Keep up the good work.
this is great! wow..i love it! the last chapter was so funny*is trying to stop laughing* hehe i hope u bring on another one!
the sex change thing is kinda weird, but if legolas turns into a woman, have aragorn fall in love with him!
Umm, it was okay, but next time, could you try and put a littelmore substance into it? But I still love it! Don’t get me wrong here. I love it! Ok I LOVE IT!!!*gets flustered and red in face* What more do you want?
Thats hilarious! Yet its suspenseful at the same time.
Great chapter! ur writings da best!
Nice chapter! Can’t wait for the next one!!!!
He removed Legolas’s thighs? Oh, my, he really has no luck at all, does he?
Very, very good so far!
Well, it WAS an okay story, but teh sex change? Eeww. So totally not Leggy. (Kinda funny, but NOT leggy.)
This chapter was great! I was kinda busy, so it was a while before I could read it. sorry. 🙂
hm…You know that Elrond is not really Aragorn’s father and that Elrohir and Elladan are hundreds of years old and that Elves do not fear ghosts? And that sex change is not a side affect of anything and silence from Aragorn and Elrond during the half hour when Legolas was looking at himself would not be very probable? And that Elrond would not beat someone and he would also not hesitate to apologize for something he knew he should apologize for? Well….other than your out of characterness for Legolas, Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, and Elrond it is pretty good. If you could, you should probably spare a few moments to check over your work for grammar and spelling errors.
And yes i have to post again to state more clearly my opinion on this story. I do not think that any of the characters would do anything like what has happened so far in this story. You may need to think about the complexity of the lives of the characters and the character of the characters. It seems to me that you are giving these characters the skins of the characters in the book and not their minds. The sex change thing when he does not change sexes is a very tacky thing to add to a story, but when it is added in slightly as a few seconds of humor, it’s not that bad. When it is covered the first time you do not need to reffer to it again and again and again. You shoud probably stop talking about it. I would enjoy it more if you would stop talking about it. Although the majority of your readers do take humor in that part so please do not change what you had in mind just for me. Now, don’t get me wrong, i’m not trying to be mean. I admire you for being so bold as to write a fanfiction. I am just trying to say that you really need to examine the characters in this story more and write what they would do not what will be funny. Write true to your characters. And since (as you have stated in your disclaimers every time lol v. funny) the characters belong to Tolkien, you should try your best to keep them true to how Tolkien made them.
Hi! I must say, I fell in love with your story. I loved all of it! Poor Legolas… He must be in pain! Please update soon!
Hmmm, not really sure if I like it or no. It’s actually a bit gross. Interesting though.
I hope you pass that teat. When you can PLEASE wright more it is way to intresing to stop now. Good job so far I love it