Who Am I by Lady_Firniswin
Who Am I
By Firniswin
Who am I,
That I leave my family to travel on my own?
Who am I,
To journey realms unknown?
Who am I,
My future has hardly been unfurled?
Who am I,
To this frightening world?
What kind of king am I,
To leave my country at an hour of need?
What kind of king am I,
That I do only great deed?
What kind of king am I,
That I leave my lands unaided?
What kind of king am I,
Why am I so hated?
I watch for others,
But none of my own.
I trek on far,
But never go home.
Who am I?
Who was I meant to be?
Why was this responsibility left to me?
Why do they make me feel,
Guilty of being free?
Eru,
I ask this question now,
In a silent plea.
Who Am I?
5 Comments
but why???
okay i will be give a better criticism. now i’m sure aragorn must have contemplated with that thought every now and again but is it really worthy of a poem? i’m not flaming. perhaps if you added more descriptions, more emotions rather then the questions oh so often. which i get, you’re trying to prove a point in his view: WHo am I?
but yeh. that’s my two cents.
beautiful! absolutely excellent!!!! write more!!!!!!!!
Wow! Soooo good!
Aragorn a little upset about being king, huh?
K.C.
Nice poem! I can’t write stuff like that, only stories.