works by Vamm_Goda
I like everything, except the ears…I think they look a bit too long. Try putting a necklace around her too
I really like, a good start. I’m really into Manga and Anime, so I know aht your doing. Keep going with that
but make the ears a little smaller. Other wise pretty good.
ya.. i like it all it looks great!
I think the ears are no problem. The head’s a bit too small for the body, mebbe the torso needs some curves,
The arms too….legs too long, but you got the shape right!! Sorry to be so critical >.< There are bettah ppls
to listen to than me….-.- But i likes it! ^^
that’s really cool looking! just make the ears a bit smaller.
The head is a bit off, but other than that it’s pretty good. 🙂
i really like the eyes, but perhaps u should work on her pose a little more
Yeah, i really like it. I too, am aslo into Anime and I thinkj it’s gr8!
OO thats really good, is it from a book that teaches u how to draw manga? ive seen it somewhere…
Yes it is from that one book! by Christopher Hart… but what was it called…
i don’t like to criticise, but you asked for it, so: the ears are too big for the head and the head is too
small for the body, so make the ears smaller and the head *slightly* bigger.
aye! Thats a good picture… I know people criticize it for like head being too small, but I think its unique!
Her bottom half could use a little work (the legs I mean). Her right leg is a little deformed (N.O.)
I cant even draw… Ima try tho! Make ears slightly smaller… looks like a Night Elf. =) Eyes on the side are
AWESOME (sorry 4 the comment w/ no reply… can get get that taken off?) Good Job on eyes!!!
Actually, I fully intended for her ears to be that size. My friend asked if I could make them that size.
Very good for a start, but i would try to give a litle form to the arms, and one leg kinda pointy, very good
Vamm, you’re doin’ great for your first anime, try to work on giving form to the arms and legs, proportion-
b/c you don’t want body parts different sizes, check out anipike.com for pics of anime and manga,
btw, i think the ears are cool!!!
her legs look a bit like noodles…maybe try some muscle definition? (on arms and legs)
also, her clothes look too 2-D. try drawing some wrinkles/folds, and separate the different objects
ie. the belt and the pants are not one thing, and her pants shouldn’t look painted on…not baggy, but not
this tight (not without some muscle tone, at least)..ok, i’m done…nice pic otherwise!
pretty good for not drawing anime before, I like the eyes u drew on the side ^-^
Hm.. This is just me, but I don’t think Elves would dress this way.
This is a crituic but I think she looks shy
My best friend would love this one. The eyes you drew on the side are gourgeous.
its really nice but the ears are too long and i would add a crown or necklace
Your eyes rock! When I try to make a picture I always screw-up on the eyes…it’s very nice!
I can’t really see the face enough but it looks like it’s good especially if u did the eyes like your little
sketches on the side!! the ears are a bit too long but overall it’s a really goood picture!!
I mean good picture!!;-)
good for a first try… keep practicing
just what everyone needs another elf to gauk at
She reminds me of the Tomb Raider chick.
To EareliaBennington: Thats exactly what I thought
This is such an old pic . . . not my normal style at all. Thanks for the comments/critiques!
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I like everything, except the ears…I think they look a bit too long. Try putting a necklace around her too
I really like, a good start. I’m really into Manga and Anime, so I know aht your doing. Keep going with that
but make the ears a little smaller. Other wise pretty good.
ya.. i like it all it looks great!
I think the ears are no problem. The head’s a bit too small for the body, mebbe the torso needs some curves,
The arms too….legs too long, but you got the shape right!! Sorry to be so critical >.< There are bettah ppls
to listen to than me….-.- But i likes it! ^^
that’s really cool looking! just make the ears a bit smaller.
The head is a bit off, but other than that it’s pretty good. 🙂
i really like the eyes, but perhaps u should work on her pose a little more
Yeah, i really like it. I too, am aslo into Anime and I thinkj it’s gr8!
OO thats really good, is it from a book that teaches u how to draw manga? ive seen it somewhere…
Yes it is from that one book! by Christopher Hart… but what was it called…
i don’t like to criticise, but you asked for it, so: the ears are too big for the head and the head is too
small for the body, so make the ears smaller and the head *slightly* bigger.
aye! Thats a good picture… I know people criticize it for like head being too small, but I think its unique!
Her bottom half could use a little work (the legs I mean). Her right leg is a little deformed (N.O.)
I cant even draw… Ima try tho! Make ears slightly smaller… looks like a Night Elf. =) Eyes on the side are
AWESOME (sorry 4 the comment w/ no reply… can get get that taken off?) Good Job on eyes!!!
Actually, I fully intended for her ears to be that size. My friend asked if I could make them that size.
Very good for a start, but i would try to give a litle form to the arms, and one leg kinda pointy, very good
Vamm, you’re doin’ great for your first anime, try to work on giving form to the arms and legs, proportion-
b/c you don’t want body parts different sizes, check out anipike.com for pics of anime and manga,
btw, i think the ears are cool!!!
her legs look a bit like noodles…maybe try some muscle definition? (on arms and legs)
also, her clothes look too 2-D. try drawing some wrinkles/folds, and separate the different objects
ie. the belt and the pants are not one thing, and her pants shouldn’t look painted on…not baggy, but not
this tight (not without some muscle tone, at least)..ok, i’m done…nice pic otherwise!
pretty good for not drawing anime before, I like the eyes u drew on the side ^-^
Hm.. This is just me, but I don’t think Elves would dress this way.
This is a crituic but I think she looks shy
My best friend would love this one. The eyes you drew on the side are gourgeous.
its really nice but the ears are too long and i would add a crown or necklace
Your eyes rock! When I try to make a picture I always screw-up on the eyes…it’s very nice!
I can’t really see the face enough but it looks like it’s good especially if u did the eyes like your little
sketches on the side!! the ears are a bit too long but overall it’s a really goood picture!!
I mean good picture!!;-)
good for a first try… keep practicing
just what everyone needs another elf to gauk at
She reminds me of the Tomb Raider chick.
To EareliaBennington: Thats exactly what I thought
This is such an old pic . . . not my normal style at all. Thanks for the comments/critiques!