Very good pic, but it would be better if you don’t put ink on the brooch. But this is my opinion!
Aye, but I like it more on the brooch than in the eyes…
You’ve done well but I agree that the ink on the brooch is distracting. Noses are not easy at the best of
times, mouths are a pain…best not to outline them too heavily. Rely on your shading to give them shape.
Thank you for the tips Bloduewedd!
This is really good, the broach does stand out but its really pretty!
The broach is really really good! I’ve been trying to draw these for a while but I never got close!
i would say that to make it gandalf, you might want to twig out the beard a bit. by which i mean, don’t make..
..it so manicured and perfect. gandalf’s a hard rider, often mud splattered. about the broach: the outlining..
..is very pretty, but it makes it stand out a little to much against the rest of him. the pupils should only..
..be as dark as you can make them with the pencil. mouths and noses…just don’t outline. this is very good!!
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Very good pic, but it would be better if you don’t put ink on the brooch. But this is my opinion!
Aye, but I like it more on the brooch than in the eyes…
You’ve done well but I agree that the ink on the brooch is distracting. Noses are not easy at the best of
times, mouths are a pain…best not to outline them too heavily. Rely on your shading to give them shape.
Thank you for the tips Bloduewedd!
This is really good, the broach does stand out but its really pretty!
The broach is really really good! I’ve been trying to draw these for a while but I never got close!
i would say that to make it gandalf, you might want to twig out the beard a bit. by which i mean, don’t make..
..it so manicured and perfect. gandalf’s a hard rider, often mud splattered. about the broach: the outlining..
..is very pretty, but it makes it stand out a little to much against the rest of him. the pupils should only..
..be as dark as you can make them with the pencil. mouths and noses…just don’t outline. this is very good!!